5I decided to rewrite this chapter, after realizing (actually told flat out in reviews) how ooc the previous version was for Leo and Luna. I would like to thank Shardzwing52 for the actually constructive critism and also to Logan, if you didn't like my other 5D's fanfic then what the hell compelled you to look at this one? Nobody forced you to read this. Well with that all said here's chapter 2 take 2
Leo: You better not make me look stupid like last time!
Me: I won't! I promise I won't ever do that again.
Leo: You better…
Me: (rolls my eyes to the side) Jezz
Everyone quickly got to unpacking their stuff. Taking out snacks, inflatable tubes, some drinks, and most important of all the sunscreen.
"Nyh nyh come on!" Leo grunted as he tried to squeeze what little he could out of his and Luna's nearly depleted bottle of spf.
"What's wrong?" Luna asked as her ever growing frustrated brother kept trying to scrap the bottom of the barrel.
"The stupid bottle won't let anything out! COME ON ALREADY!" he yelled at the bottle while twisting it. Luna giggled at her brother's endeavors as she walked over to a still covered up Akiza and whispered something into her ear
While behind the snack bar the crony sent to kidnap the twins was in the middle of a silent freak out.
"What am I gonna do? He only said that they'd be here not that they would have any friends with them. And especially friends who could kick my ass in a second!" he said as peeked over to them watching Luna grab sunscreen from Akiza and then squeezing some onto Leo. Who jumped at how cool it felt on his skin, making everyone but him laugh while his sister helped rub it over his back and shoulders.
"Remind me why I have to put this stuff on? Isn't just going to wash off in the water anyway?"
"Better you have it on now before you turn into a sun dried tomato" Akiza stated as she took off her swim robe and revealed her little 'treat' for Yusei. Crow practically drooled over Akiza while Jack averted his eyes because of Carly. Yusei took a look at Akiza and had to admit she did look beautiful in that, but out of modesty he didn't stare at her like Crow was. He mainly focused on getting his sun block on and acknowledged Akiza with a simple
"You look great" Akiza was happy that he noticed, showing a faint blush that showed it. While right next to her Leo was starring at her and nudge his sister
"What?"
"Hey I thought Akiza was going to bring a treat…."
"Yeah for Yusei Leo not you"
"But what did she get him? All that she brought was her new butt floss" Luna looked over at her brother after that last statement
"What are you talking about?" she asked as her twin pointed out Akiza's bikini bottom which was tightly wrapped around her butt cheeks. Luna held back a laugh as she looked back to her brother
"See? You've got to admit it looks like that" Luna nodded as she calmed herself down, always trying to be the more serious twin.
"Ok so…" she began to ask as she grabbed a map of the park from her bag and set out on the table "…what should we do first?". Leo inspected the map thoroughly for the funnest thing he could possibly find.
"Oh how 'bout this one?" Leo said excitedly at a couple of tub slides lined up next to each other, perfect for racing down. Luna looked down at with a grin as she nodded
"Yeah sure but can we go to the wave pool first. I want to get a little wet before I go down any slides"
"Oh ok we can do that" he said happily as he got up with his twin and ran off to the wave pool. The creepy man in the shadows heard them and closely followed them to wait for a better gambit for kidnapping them. He was beginning to think that he might not be able to pull this off. But he still had to try, otherwise he might die
Which left the others alone…
"So Yusei…?" Akiza asked as she sat down next to him "…mind rubbing some lotion on my back?" Yusei stared at Akiza from behind and a small stream of blood was starting to leak from his nose as he shakefully said
"S-sure" he said as he put some lotion on his hands and began to rub on her. Akiza gave the occasional happy sigh to tease him.
Crow was on the opposite end of the table, all sun blocked up, drinking a soda while he on looked the happy couple.
'That lucky bastard…' he thought to himself as he took a sip. Every time he saw Yusei and Akiza together that's what he thought. Now he wasn't completely bad in the dating scene. He had his fair share of short time relationships with some nice looking girls, but he never could find a girl who was beyond her looks like Akiza. Some would say he's jealous of Yusei but he would claim that's far from the truth, he envied him sure but he was never jealous. No one would believe that these were his thoughts, they always thought he was a big pervert. But they couldn't be further from the truth, that was just a persona to conceal his true feelings. Just as he was about to take his last sip he looked over to the other happy couple
Jack was looking down at a fold up map of the park and was deciding on what he wanted to do first. While Carly tried to get his attention by any means
"Jack why don't we go get a double tube and go down the lazy river?" she said in cutesy tone as she almost begged while leaning across the table toward. Jack just ignored her suggestion and kept looking at the map. She grunted then just sat back and crossed her arms, she knew Jack was self obsessive and could get over that in a lot of situations but she thought he would at least go with her on something today.
'That jerk…' Crow thought to himself as he on looked the two '…he should be spending his whole day with her, not trying to find what slide he wants to go on first' in a matter of seconds he found himself walking over to their table, to do what he didn't really know. He was standing over the table as Carly did a short wave to say hi
"Hey, if you want I could go to the river with you" He suggested trying to be nice since it was clear that Jack wasn't going to be. At first Carly was going to say no since she and Jack were in a semi-relationship and also because Jack had told her about how perverted Crow could be, but then a thought occurred to her. If Jack saw her with crow he'd get mad and then start paying more attention to her and would be the romantic guy she knew he could be.
"Sure I would like to do that, since He won't!" she said stressing on he to get her point across to Jack. Though it didn't seem like it penetrated through to him at all
In a slight huff she left with Crow to the lazy river, both taking individual tubes instead of a twin tube like she had originally suggested to Jack. Regardless they both had fun and got really wet.
If only Carly had stayed a couple seconds more…
Jack sighed as he closed his eyes then brought his hands to his ears and plucked something out of them. Those were his special ear plugs; he carried them along with him whenever he didn't want to hear something. In this case it was the music playing around the park, he hated modern music it had too much techno.
"Finnaly that music changed. So Carly do you want to go down the tube slides for a start or go over to the wave pool?" he asked as he opened his eyes to find no Carly "Carly? Carly!" Jack yelled out as he searched around for her with his eyes. When he couldn't find her he looked to his best friend massaging his girlfriend
"Hey you two, did you see where Carly went?" Akiza nodded while Yusei finished up her back
"Yeah she went with Crow somewhere"
"Where?" Akiza shrugged not listening to that part, she never really was someone to peer into someone else's business.
"I know they went over to the lazy river" Yusei told Jack, who nodded to thank him before heading off to find his girlfriend. Leaving Yusei and Akiza alone
Yusei looked over to Akiza, admiring how she now glistened with the sun like the angel she was.
"So Yusei, what do you want to do?" she asked as Yusei looked at her face rather than all of her
"Anything you want to"
"That's not a answer Yusei" Akiza said as Yusei thought for a second then saw a short line for a double seated tube ride.
"How about that?" he suggested as Akiza looked over to the slide and nodded. It wasn't to high of a slide but it's not like it was a baby slide.
"Sure come on" she said grabbing his hand and walking over to the slide with him, happy to just be with him.
Meanwhile at the wave pool
There were at least a hundred people in the giant wave pool. Some trying to stay cool and other's like our protagonists just trying to start off their fun day at the park
Speaking of them…
"Here comes a big one!" Leo said as he ran/swam toward the back of the pool with his sister not too far behind him.
While on the shallow end of the pool Crow and Carly stood letting the water soak up their feet with each wave. Crow looked over to Carly and had to admit, in the bright sun light in a swim suit she didn't look half bad and she had a funny personality. Not weird funny but funny funny, if she wasn't Jack's then he might've considered going on a date with her. But no he was to loyal of a friend to do that.
"C'mon let's go swim out, the whole reason I came here was to get wet" Crow said as he walked into the wave pool egging her to come with. She smiled with a nod as she followed him in. She couldn't wait till Jack saw him with her, then he'd rush to her get her back then spend the whole day with her just like she wanted.
Just as they were going in the twins were coming out
"Alright next up the slides!" he said happily as he shook off some of the water on him, like a dog, while his sister straightened back her hair so it wasn't all over the place
"Come on let's go get some tubes" she said as he nodded and walked by her side to the rental stand to get some tubes.
While not too far behind them was the thug that's planning on kidnapping them. As he watched them go about through the park he came to the realization that it would be impossible to kidnap them both. But…but if he were to kidnap at least one of them his boss probably wouldn't kill him and still would get the same amount of ransom.
'Yeah just one of them will do…' he thought as he looked at them '… I'll kidnap her. She's the one that is most likely to follow in her parents footsteps. That boy will probably be lucky if he gets a job in a mail room' he thought as the twins got their tubes and ran off to the racing slides, with their stalker not too far behind them.
And there you go
Leo: That was way better than the other one
Me: why do I feel like you're going to be the only one to say that?