Okay so this is my first Halloween fanfiction. Please don't be too harsh, but critism is welcome.
School, I hate it. Church youth group, I love it. Our youth group asked the local middle school if we could hold a summer camp lock-in. They agreed.
I was brushing my teeth when I heard a scream from the hallway. I ran into the hallway and saw my, irritating, friend's head in the hands of Michael Meyers. He looked up and saw me. I started to run towards the other people who "volunteered" to help set up and stay a couple nights. They are also known as the friends I forced to go. They were snooping in Pettus' classroom.
"He's come," I panted.
"Zeph. That sounds wrong," Trix said.
"I'm…not…kidding. Michael Meyers is here!" I said.
"What?" Connor said half afraid, half disbelief.
"He's following me. We've got to get out of here…alive," I said. A shadow passed by the door. I pointed to the door to Smith's room. We silently moved to the door. I pressed my ear to the wall. Nothing then, BOOM! I jumped up and ran for the other door followed by everyone else.
Here's what I should've done: run out of the school. This is what I actually did: ran deeper into the school. We went through the gym, behind the stage, in the hallway separating the locker rooms.
"What are we going to do?" Joshua asked.
"What do you think, die? No, we will survive," I whispered.
"We need to devise a more specific plan, Phyre," Xavier said. We heard the room connected to the hallway open. I pointed to the shadows. Michael in the hall but he just walked through. Joshua jumped up and ran to the room's door.
"No, idiot," I hissed. Meyers had apparently known this would happen, because his response time was faster than a cat's.
Sorry, it was so short, but I was typing it and this seemed like a good place to stop. I will update if I get 5 reviews. I will get the next part out when I get it typed up and enough reviews.