Heres the revised version of chapter four i hope it's better than the last one mabey Ill get some new reveiws.
Until then read and reveiw sadly i dont own Erik Gaston Lexron does, but everthing else you see is mine enjoy bye
The night went quickly and smoothly for me. Thanks to Erik i was able to laugh, and smile in ways that i had't done in years. I even sang a little, leaving the whole shop in awe upon my finish . I was just about to do an encore when Richard stormed from his office, and in formed his customers that he ran a cafe not a opera house. He then returned to his office turning his back on the boos he received. Jamie of course was right on my heels telling me how perfect my voice was, and asked how i had made it sound like that. I just smiled, and kept my angel of music to my self. My only thought was of how much i wanted to see him again.
I watched her smile, i watched her sing and i watched her dance.
I saw the light in her eyes. A light i had't seen since our junior year in high school .
I took mental pictures ,so i would always remember her the way she truly meant to be.
Later when the night became slow i asked her what her secret was, all she did was smile at me but that was enough. I knew that smile anywhere, i could pick out from the crowd it was the smile of love. When i saw that look a weight was lifted off my shoulders.
I loved my friend like a sister ,but letting her lean on me the way she did was becoming harder and harder. I knew that she found some who could make her truly happy, i could go back to the being the best friend i was meant to be.
He sat in the back of the coffee shop like he always did. His face set in anger as he watched her work . He glared at her smile and her happiness , because he knew that he was't the cause.
He was the famous Charles de chaney. He had to leave France just to find someone who did't know his name ,and yet she had said no to him. He could give her anything and everything she wanted. He had heard other girls whisper how they wished that they were her, just to have a chance to be on his arm. He had sent men to bring her to him so he could make her see what he could do for her but they never came, and here she was having the night of her life in this whole in the wall. While he was forced to watch but not have her.
The shop closed down at ten sharp, i then changed out of my uniform and prepared for my punishment. I was lifting the twenty pound box from the truck. Five down twenty five more to go. I then heard a voice sing to me ''brava braviss , and i slowly sang back.
''Angle of music guide and guardian grant to me your glory.
Angle of music hide no longer flatter me strange angel .
A moment later i felt the breeze from his cape as he appeared by my side.
''You were beautiful tonight he said presenting me with a red black ribbon stemmed rose.
''A beauty that would have gone unknown if not for you i said as i hugged him . he was stiffened at first because of so many years without contact but then he quickly returned my hug it was then that i realized that i liked the way he held me . I heard his voice from far away say ''what are you doing? ''Huh oh im just doing this punishment Richard assigned me to i said absently still caught up in thoughts of his touch. ''Why what great crime have you committed Erik said quickly as anger started to build in his voice. '' Nothing really i just missed two days of work and Charles has had his ass on his shoulders for those two days anger growing in my eyes now. My face softened when i saw Erik grimace i knew he hated it when i cussed. ''Sorry i said as i went back to work. I climbed back into the truck, and got another box but lost my footing as i began to climb back out. I let out a small cry as i began to fall, but then two strong arms caught me the box how ever fell to the ground .
''A lady does not swear ,and should not have to work this hard to earn her keep. I will unload the boxes and bring them to you. You can put away there contents inside understood Erik asked showing a caring smile. ''Yes i say nodding then to my dismay he puts me down and his hands are at his sides. I quickly go in side to open the boxes that were already there it was't until i was sure that he could no longer see me that i allowed myself to blush and take in what just happened. He was so charismatic and sexy the way his blue eyes and mask capture the moon light. I wanted to feel the cool porcelain under my fingers what the hell was Christine
thinking. I heard his foot steps then opened a box of coffee, and took some of the bags to be divided to the kitchen ,and individual sale. When the boxes started to thin i put a quarter in the juke box, and preheated the oven. Well moncher that was the last one Erik said as he walked into the shop. Thank you so much that would have took me forever on my own, i said smiling as my bare feet moved across the floor . I painted my toes just be for i met you, i said keeping pace with the beat . ''Ive never seen that color before Erik said as he smiled at my toes, then he caught sight of the back of my right heel . '' I was in and out of the hospital allot as i kid these were the parting gifts they left , i said my voice like ice. ''Forgive me i did't mean to upset you Erik said quickly.
''Im not upset im glad you saw them i could't hide them forever . These are just what i was given ,and i must find a way to live it. Just think of it as another thing we have in common. i said smiling. ''If you wish Erik said as he lead me back onto the floor. As look after you by the fray played. He wrapped his arms around my waist again as he led me across the floor .My arms were around his neck my head was on his shoulder ,and when he moved me just right i could feel the coolness of his mask . I then felt him run his fingers through my hair. Then i heard him whisper in my ear.
''Ooh ooh be my baby ill look after you.
At that moment i felt a shiver run down my spine as i turned to face him then the song ended and so did our dance . Your excellent dancer Erik said still holding me.
''Im no where near as good as you , i said letting my hair fall into my face. ''I should tell you how beautiful you look when you blush Erik said smiling at me, while slightly blushing him self. ''Then i guess i should tell you how handsome i think you are, i said smiling back . Erik then looked deep into my brown eyes i returned the gaze to his blue, and before i knew what was happening his lips were touching mine. I wrapped my arms tighter around his neck as i felt him pull me closer. at long last something other than music made sense in my life it was love .
Well there it is ladies and gents the last revised chapter before chapter five the plot thickens .
Two me like me but what will happen will love find its way through Eriks darkness or will he push it away out of fear find out in chapter five see ya then read and review please bye:D