Woah… Already have six total reviews… I'm glad all you people like my story! OUO Next up is Mistyflower68's suggestion. But, first, REVIEWS!
Mossstar - Cool ideas. But, I think I'm only going to do number one at the moment, partially because I have only read up to book five of the Power of Three. Stupid library not having book six…
Bells are Still Ringing - Yes, she stayed with Graystripe in ThunderClan. And I didn't really think about that… Hmmm… Funny how one little event changes the whole timeline. X3
My name is swansong - No problem! Sorry it was kinda short, but I personally liked how it turned out and loved writing it.
What if Squirrelpaw Never Went With Brambleclaw to the Sun-Drown-Place?Reviewer: Mistyflower68
The ginger she-cat hesitated at the base of the rise. What if Firestar just got angrier with her for running from the Clan? Squirrelpaw glanced at Brambleclaw and, in a moment's thought, said, "I'm not coming."
Her Clanmate seemed shocked at the least, and slightly relieved. He said, "Then go back to the camp." And that's what she did. She shot one last glance at the tom's disappearing form before dashing back to camp, to her home. She couldn't help but wonder, though, what the dark-furred tom faced now…
Brambleclaw glanced at his sister, her breath heavy from the infected rat bite. He sighed heavily and wandered out of the abandoned Twoleg nest. He sat down outside, glancing at the stars. Why was everything going wrong? Tawnypelt was on the verge of death… Well, he'd better get to sleep… But the tom debated whether he had made the right decisions, such as following Purdy. So he turned around and crept back inside, lying down beside Tawnypelt, worried for his sister.
The following morning was filled with wandering. And so was the day after. And another, until they reached a forest. The prey was plentiful, but Tawnypelt just grew weaker. Every cat was at a loss on what to do, but they continued on nonetheless. Her shoulder grew worse and worse. Then they reached the sun-drown-place. Brambleclaw, not paying attention, stumbled into the cavernous 'mouth' and nearly drowned, though he was saved by the two RiverClan cats. They progressed deeper into the cave, eventually reaching what appeared to be a den, and waited. They didn't have to wait long before a badger lumbered into the cave. All five, short of Tawnypelt, jumped to their paws, fur on end and claws unsheathed. But the badger soothed, "Do not fear, brave warriors. I friend of cat."
This shocked the cats. A talking badger? They eventually learned it was named Midnight and realized StarClan had sent them to listen to this badger, not wait for the time midnight. Midnight tried her best to help Tawnypelt, but… there was no other choice…
They spent a short time at Midnight's den, long enough for Tawnypelt's injury to heal, then left, though the tri-colored ShadowClan cat limped away with only three paws. There had been no other option besides amputation. Midnight had tried to make it as painless as possible, but it had still hurt Tawnypelt. Now they moved back, with Midnight along with them.
The rest… well, make that up for yourself, kiddies. I thought, if it hadn't been for Squirrelpaw, they wouldn't have gotten the burdock at the forest after Twolegplace, and, as a result, Tawnypelt's injury would've infected beyond repair. And I know, I fail at imitating Midnight's speaking, at least, I think… e.O I wuvs all you people who are reviewing! Next up will be if feathertail didn't die, so I can start from a bit in the future, though, you know, with Squirrelpaw.