yes, yes.. that is a really good idea!
"yay! my ideas are good!"
this will surly make this fanfiction much better after putting a chapter from one of my other stores init.
"yeah... i liked that chapter though... the Ninja Wank Fairy was a good idea for the life note!"
"no way, NO WAY!" said a teenaged unicorn chatting to her annoying best friend on the Crystal Ball.
"Apple Tart is 35?!" she then realized she was slightly late, it was 7:50, and she was told to come by at 7:00!
"oh, gotta go hairy, I'M BABY SITING!" she dashed over her peg and got her coat.
"i know, but my mother wants me to EARN my money!
can you believe it?" the filly quickly cleaned up her room.
"i'lcallyoufromthereBYE." she shouted galloping out the door like 1000 dogs where raseing for a bone.
"unbelievable..." she thought running out of the door.
this fillies name was lookie, yes, i made that name up on the spot, right now, right here.
she was a blue unicorn with two red bows in her mane.
after going around in circles she had made it too the house.
the house was slightly cardboard like, being gray and not very child friendly, you'd never guess that this house was home to a family of 9.
"hello mrs starstruck..." she said
"Cherry is in her room and Pluto is going to be home from school very soon.
also, don't mind about flame and Orange, those two are problerly out with they're friends... (honestly, i don't know what is with that girl)" mrs Starstruck said fluttering out of the house with a bit of money and a saddle bag attracted to her.
"sigh... Time to check out they're fridge!" she said dashing to the kitchen every near the siting room.
Lookie went to the fridge and used her magic to make herself a sandwich, then she went to the sofa and used her Crystal ball to call up her friend again.
"hairy? Hi~!" she said and then took abite of the sandwitch.
Cherry had gotten up from her bed, crawling over to Lookie and looking at her
"Hello!" she shouted, but becarse she was a baby it didn't really come out sounding alot like the word.
"hello Cherry-NO WAY?!" she shouted going back to her conversation.
Cherry just climbed on to the sofa and started poking her.
"what are you doing?"
"I'm performing BRAIN surgery... sorry hairy."
Cherry pulled her tail and said "I'm hungry."
Lookie looked slightly annoyed, but because Cherry was just a child she used her magic and sliced her sandwich in half, sharing it with Cherry.
Cherry looked sadly, she didn't want this "i want Mashed Potatoz!"
"Cherry! i'm on the phone~"
"al i wanted was masht pahtaytoz..." Lookie, being the pony she was, just said "I'll call you back Hairy..." and turned off the Crystal Ball with her magic.
"ok kiddo, come on." she said picking up Cherry with her magic and then leaving the snadwitch to it's lonesome.
After alot of annoying pain from Cherry becarse she didn't want to eat her mashed potato becarse it didn't seem right, it was 8:00.
"i'm back!" shouted Pluto walking into the house and puting her bag on the table.
"No WAY! YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!" shouted Lookie still on the Cystal Ball and Cherry eating her Mashed Potato.
"hi Lookie, is my bother and sister here yet?"
"no- hun? oh, Pluto, it's for you"
Pluto got handed the Cystal Ball.
"Pluto? you there?" on the other end was Pluto's Brother, he sounded alittle drunk,but she was just wondering how he was holding it.
"Ok, um.. i'm going to be alittle late home, i met some ponies who are going to fight a war or something, i don't know. i'm not going to be late home, or gone for a few days, please don't be worryed, oh and can you not tell mother, i really don't want her to worry about anything"
Pluto nodded and then hanged up.
"so what did big bro say?"
"oh, nothing... he just won't be here for a while"
Cherry almost looked sad at that, she was sort of used to Orange not being here most of the time.
phew, that was long...
"i know right? good idea, was it?"
my hands really hurt after that chapter .n.