Hi Everyone!

Sorry for the earlier post. I posted this in the wrong thread so instead I made a new topic. My pen name is Serena Tsunami and I've been searching for a committed beta reader that can beta read a Gundam Wing/Sailor Moon Crossover. My prologue and chapter 1 - 6 have been completed since December 2010 and I've been anxiously trying to find a reliable beta reader who would beta read it. At this rate, my story will never be posted. Knowing that there aren't many Gundam Wing/Sailor Moon Crossover fans as there was before, I'm hoping to find someone. I understand that people have lives, I just wanted to say that this story is extremely long. For example, my prologue is so long that it reached 21,000+ words. I had to split it into 3 parts because of its length. The title of my story is called 'A Sealed Innocence'. Some of you might have heard of it because I've already posted five installments on FF.net. However, this story has been through major revisions, making the story on FF.net obsolete. Please do not compare the version of 'A Sealed Innocence' and the stories that are already posted on FF.net because my writing abilities have greatly improved since then. It is an alternate universe and its genre consists of dark, angst, drama, romance, action, sci-fi and mecha. It is about two children (Heero Yuy and Usagi Tsukino) that were taken from an orphanage at a young age by a mad scientist (Doctor J) and were completely isolated from society and stripped them off of their innocence. Doctor J trained them to be emotionless soldiers to be used as tools of war and manipulated them to believe his violent views of obtaining peace. When Heero turned 15, he was sent on a mission, (Gundam Wing series) while Usagi was left behind to do missions behind the scenes. During this time, Heero was exposed to the real world and learned that Doctor J's violent views of needless bloodshed in obtaining peace was not the only way. The actual story starts about four years after the end of the Gundam Wing series, where Usagi is sent off to do continuous missions in order to prevent another war from breaking out. When she meets Heero, things start to fall apart. The reason is that Heero was able to grow as a character and Usagi was not because she was still manipulated by the doctor. In the end, this is a dark Heero and Usagi romance.

The areas I need help at is the line editing portion; grammar, spelling, punctuations, sentence structure, etc. I'm not saying that I'm extremely horrible at it, I just tend to miss some stuff that others might see.

There is a lot more about this story than just this little summary and there are still many more important points that were not said. If I kept writing, I would be writing forever. If anyone is interested or has any questions, please feel free to contact me. Hopefully this letter convinces someone to beta my fan fiction. I look forward to your responses.

Serena Tsunami

3/15/2012 #1 Report

Check out the "Become a Beta" thread. http://www.fanfiction.net/topic/29411/60852149/1/Become-a-Beta-Reader-Here - There have been a whole lot of people agreeing to offer there services as BETAs while I've been away (._.) I have no computer at the moment, I rely on anytime I can get with a PC at the moment haha. Hope this helps c:

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