You could show us an excerpt or two someplace else...like here.
In other news, i'm going to wait with writing anything else about Murphy's Law until i know the characters a little better.
5/17/2010 #34 ReportAwwww. XD
Y'know, I used to write SO MANY adult-rated fics...
...
Urge to write Janine's Diary... RISING.
5/17/2010 #37 ReportXD
Maybe after the exams? (Who am I kidding, while i'm procrastinating in study leave)
5/17/2010 #39 ReportIt will probably end up NOT smutty. I can't write smut at the moment.
5/17/2010 #41 ReportIt'll probably be someone finding it and reading it. (Shrug)
Nah, haven't been able to since October.
5/18/2010 #43 ReportI wrote something that had personal importance and it kinda sucked the distance away.
(Wow that's ambiguous. DXD)
Don't hold your breath. XD
5/19/2010 #45 ReportWater-Smurf, you sounded like you needed cheering up. :)
So here's a cute picture for you. It's a quickie, so I apologise for the rough colouring in parts.
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/139/5/1/Cuteness_by_Kaytara.png
I honestly have no idea what the furry little monster is doing there. It's probably the Snarl in disguise.
5/19/2010 #46 ReportThe only problem is that with what I know of Tiasal, I'm just waiting for her to rip out the bunny's heart and feast on the innards.
5/19/2010 #47 ReportThat's funny. When my mom came in and saw the image (and got past the cooing stage), the first thing she asked was whether she was going to eat the bunny, at which I nodded solemnly.
Here's a closeup, because I think it looks extra cute: http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/139/7/a/Cuteness_Magnified_by_Kaytara.png
:D
5/19/2010 . Edited 5/19/2010 #48 ReportOHMYGODSOCUTE! :D :D :D :D :D She's adorable!
But tsk, tsk, shame, Asta. Deirdre is the 'rip heart out' type. Tiasal's happy with cute animals. ^.^
5/19/2010 #49 ReportI'm not sure what the artistic term for this is, but I really like the color scheme in it, Kaytara. All the cool colors make it relaxing to look at and I get all peaceful when I look, for lack of a better turn of phrase. And I think that you drew the eyes and textures really well (does that make sense?). It looks real and the light source stayed consistent between the eyes. And the fur really looks soft while I find myself wanting to run my hands through Tia's hair (though maybe I'd do that anyway--I have a thing for hair). And I also really like her face, and the shading is lovely. (If only I spent as much time drawing as I did writing--maybe I could make something half as decent. :P ) Sorry I can't be more thorough in my analysis, but I'm trying.
Though I must ask--how did she manage to get the bunny so calm in her arms? The wild bunnies I've seen always run away when I get within ten feet. :P
5/19/2010 #52 ReportSo...cute!
It's kind of a funny coincidence you made a picture that included a rabbit though. I'll tell you why in the crack thread.
5/19/2010 #53 ReportAre you kidding? "Sorry you can't be more thorough"? XD You only just composed an artist's dream critique. XD I'm happy you like it. Especially the light consistency thing. That's a big deal to me, as it's often a bit wild in my pictures...
As for the last, well, that just begs the question... Who is calm in whose arms? D
5/23/2010 #55 Reportyou guys are awesome. I have none of that artistic talent... "Elven Purple" hehehe
5/25/2010 #56 ReportWell, I can't draw to save my life. Embarrassing, as three of my grandparents are artists, as well as my dad...
5/25/2010 #57 ReportHowever, if I do say so myself, I am not a bad author. I have been published. Twice. ;D
6/2/2010 . Edited 6/2/2010 #59 Report Reply 
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