"Come on Atara, let's go!" her father cried as he came into her room.
Atara then heard her phone ringing.
"Let me take this call plz, dad," Atara said.
"Ok," her father said going out.
9/2/2011 #92 Report"Okay, Atara, i can still like get to you before it's to late?!" Kemetri said panting although he wasin his car.
9/2/2011 . Edited 9/2/2011 #93 Report"NO!!" Kemerti cried beating on the stearing wheel, "Well look can you try to um convince your parents to come to holly wood, i got something that might change their minds!" Kemetri said.
9/2/2011 #95 Report"Ok," Atara said.
"Dad!" she cried.
"Yes?" he asked.
"Can we go 2 Hollywood???" Atara asked "I wanna visit some friends there, u know before I get married..."
"All right," her father said "but only 4 a day!"
"Yay thx!" Atara cried.
"I can only stay there 4 a day," Atara said.
9/2/2011 #96 Report"Good, I can't wait until they come, I just hope my idea works" Kemetri said.
9/2/2011 #97 Report"I love you too" Kemetri cried driving back to the hotel, "I really can't wait to see you again" Kemetri said sweetly.
9/2/2011 #99 Report"U 2," Atara said.
"Atara! Get off that phone!" her mother cried.
9/2/2011 #100 Report"My mom, I gotta jet bye."
"ATARA!!!!!"
"Yes mom," Atara said.
"Love u," she said then she hung up.
9/2/2011 #102 ReportKemetr got out of the car and went back into the hotel.
"Man, i'm sorry, Atara but sometimes you're mom can be a big pain" Kemetri grunted as he went back to his hotel room.
(Check the chat room for something else)
9/2/2011 . Edited 9/2/2011 #103 Report"Hey, Atara..." Kemetri said panting and looking tired and worn out.
9/2/2011 #105 Report"Kemetri!!" Atara cried running up and kissing him.
9/2/2011 #106 Report"I missed you too, Atara!" Kemetri cried and then hugged her then pulled away fast with an embarrissed look on his face cause when he hugged Atara one of his hands touched her butt.
(Don't worry i'm not making it grown up i'm just taking some things i've seen from other kids cartoon shows to make it funny, honest i've have seen some things like that on kids cartoon shows, but i can edit it if you want sorry if i'm making the RP too grown up i'm just trying to put in miner things)
9/2/2011 . Edited 9/3/2011 #108 Report( It's cool just not a lot of it kk?)
Atara gave him a look.
9/2/2011 #110 Report"What? What happened?" Kemetri said to Atara.
(Okay, i'll only try to do two or three scens like that every few page of a RP like maybe after 9 or 11 pages)
9/2/2011 . Edited 9/2/2011 #111 Report"Don't u dare touch me like that again," she growled.
9/2/2011 #112 Report"Hey! I'm sorry i didn't do it on purpose!" Kemetri cried, "And besides your my girl friend any, so... And again sorry" Kemetri said as he made a face.
9/2/2011 #113 Report"Hey Kemetri" Holly said as she and Zeph came in the lobby, "Dude, what's with that look on your face?" Holly asked.
9/2/2011 #115 Report"Um... Well i'm just still a little emberressed cause of what happened when i hugged Atara" Kemetri said.
"What happened, tell me" Zeph said.
9/2/2011 #117 ReportHolly and Zeph just laughed, "You little lier!" Holly said laughing a bit more.
"Yeah, dude that didn't make any sence just come clean" Zeph said with a grin.
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