for Of Cross and Honor1/10/2014 c1 
12Princess Unikitty
Mass Effect and Dragon Age. What a perfect combination...
All this needs is Assassin's Creed, Saints Row, and Gone Home and it would've been perfect. (/sarc)
12Princess UnikittyMass Effect and Dragon Age. What a perfect combination...
All this needs is Assassin's Creed, Saints Row, and Gone Home and it would've been perfect. (/sarc)
1/9/2014 c1 4Dur'id the Druid
Interesting concept, but the obvious lack of a beta, spelling errors, no scene breaks, and many hints of a Mary-Stu protagonist ruins this story.
Polish this up more, re-post, and write another chapter or three and it may be a good story.
4Dur'id the DruidInteresting concept, but the obvious lack of a beta, spelling errors, no scene breaks, and many hints of a Mary-Stu protagonist ruins this story.
Polish this up more, re-post, and write another chapter or three and it may be a good story.