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for Danny was going to destroy the world

1/11/2014 c1 Lioness Deity
Keep going, dude.
1/11/2014 c1 5jim89
well at least someone finally sees it. I've always thought the same thing with the betrayed by friends and family in that pop up in a lot of stories have always been far as I see it and as you said OOC to me. Sam especially would never do that. You've probably come up. with The only possibility was San even consider that for a moment. especially if she doesn't have the whole story but just the first half.

so hats off to you kind sir you successfully surpassed most writers here
we definitely expect great things from you for now on
1/11/2014 c1 5MsFrizzle
You make some good points here. On the show we see it from Danny's pont of view and how the responsibility for the future is on his shoulders and you feel for how much pressure he is under. I like how you show how that responsibility falls vicariously onto Sam's shoulders. That she might be in the position of having to stop Danny before it's too late. That she must carefully watch and weigh what she sees. Is it merely a bit of youthful indiscretion or is it a sign of the slippery slope?

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