for What Zoe And Orion Shared1/22/2014 c1 
4thyrandomninja
I'm not usually one for pure emotion-fic, but this was a lot better written than what i have read before. It's not often that one reads something which expands on such a small canonical detail set AT the time of the original, and you've kept that bubbling at the surface throughout the piece very well. Bringing Orion in was done very well and wasn't focused on too strongly, which many would tend to do.
A good read (and proof that you really should be writing the emotional parts of our fic)
TRN
4thyrandomninjaI'm not usually one for pure emotion-fic, but this was a lot better written than what i have read before. It's not often that one reads something which expands on such a small canonical detail set AT the time of the original, and you've kept that bubbling at the surface throughout the piece very well. Bringing Orion in was done very well and wasn't focused on too strongly, which many would tend to do.
A good read (and proof that you really should be writing the emotional parts of our fic)
TRN
1/21/2014 c1 OptimisticLady
That was really beautifully written :3 Quite Virgil in style, methinks. I had no idea how Zoe died because I've never read it, but it was sad and pretty and I liked it. :3
That was really beautifully written :3 Quite Virgil in style, methinks. I had no idea how Zoe died because I've never read it, but it was sad and pretty and I liked it. :3
1/18/2014 c1 4King Draconias
This story was very well-written. I like how you allowed Orion to be a good person, which I'm pretty sure that he was in the original legend, unlike how some other fanfiction writers portray him. And while it was somewhat depressing, it was also very sweet. You did a great job capturing Artemis' sorrow as well as her gratitude for her hunting partners. All in all, it was a very compelling story. Good job.
4King DraconiasThis story was very well-written. I like how you allowed Orion to be a good person, which I'm pretty sure that he was in the original legend, unlike how some other fanfiction writers portray him. And while it was somewhat depressing, it was also very sweet. You did a great job capturing Artemis' sorrow as well as her gratitude for her hunting partners. All in all, it was a very compelling story. Good job.