
12/30/2024 c1
16Fontina Ori-chan
Awwwww... the last line. I like it. He sound so dominant, eyyy, they look good together, yk... hehehe

Awwwww... the last line. I like it. He sound so dominant, eyyy, they look good together, yk... hehehe
12/30/2024 c1 Fontina Ori-chan
omg... i can't believe i read the first part after reading a smut... omg..
omg... i can't believe i read the first part after reading a smut... omg..
12/10/2024 c1
4SophisticatedSage
Love everything about this, so so much. The concept is so creative, Seth x Bella is such an underrated pairing. Loved the prose too, the line about Edward turning into a cold, distant star that Bella would wish on really stuck out to me.

Love everything about this, so so much. The concept is so creative, Seth x Bella is such an underrated pairing. Loved the prose too, the line about Edward turning into a cold, distant star that Bella would wish on really stuck out to me.
12/20/2023 c1
16Fontina Ori-chan
HOWL GUYS HOWL! LET'S HOWL TOGETHER! AUUUUUUUU, damn bro, i liked the last part. Any chance you'll write that one part? Gotta be interesting... hehehe

HOWL GUYS HOWL! LET'S HOWL TOGETHER! AUUUUUUUU, damn bro, i liked the last part. Any chance you'll write that one part? Gotta be interesting... hehehe
9/13/2023 c1 The Soup Review
Good Soup
Good Soup
5/18/2023 c1
3PastOneonta
Very good! Loved Seth conning the Cullens into thinking he was nothing more than sweet and kind. He's a lot more! He's powerful and he gets what he wants. Loved Leah choosing Jake, that is a great conclusion.

Very good! Loved Seth conning the Cullens into thinking he was nothing more than sweet and kind. He's a lot more! He's powerful and he gets what he wants. Loved Leah choosing Jake, that is a great conclusion.
5/17/2022 c1 Kuzan-Cro Akagami
Soooooo...
Amooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Mating season omaigash amooooo
Soooooo...
Amooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Mating season omaigash amooooo
2/7/2021 c1
1Candylover778
Omg!
Loved It!
One of the best one shots I have read!
Loved It!
U R AN AMAZING WRITTER!
Loved this Seth!
Hahaha wonder if what Paul said will happen!

Omg!
Loved It!
One of the best one shots I have read!
Loved It!
U R AN AMAZING WRITTER!
Loved this Seth!
Hahaha wonder if what Paul said will happen!
3/4/2020 c1
1Anna Doherty
Great story I loved how strong Seth was I always thought that Bella deserved someone better than Edward

Great story I loved how strong Seth was I always thought that Bella deserved someone better than Edward
2/26/2019 c1 jswilliams131314
This was fantastic! It would be amazing if there was a follow-up but it's great nonetheless.
This was fantastic! It would be amazing if there was a follow-up but it's great nonetheless.