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10/1/2014 c1 13shadowgirlxion
lov this story! awesome job! :)
1/12/2014 c1 5x-archsage-x
I loved it; well done for portraying Rukia's confession of what happened with Kaien! It was especially good as it was characteristically fluffy of Ichigo to comfort her in his brash but caring way, so that shows you got the characters personalities perfect! Great job :)
1/12/2014 c1 2The Clawed Butterfly
these two are too cute for their own good
1/12/2014 c1 Fenris Jin
Was she talking about the Soul Society Arc? Hey! There wasn't anything to forgive there!

LOL at the end though.. XD
1/11/2014 c1 27hunterofcomedy
Not bad at all. A bit angsty but there's nothing wrong with that. Plus, I loved the metaphor of the heart beating.

Great job! Keep up the great work and happy writing! :)

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