
9/29/2015 c2 Guest
Is there an update coming soon?
Is there an update coming soon?
8/6/2015 c2
2veld b
oh. my. god. I was really excited when I stumble upon this fic and I thought it was like a one shot. but noooo and I'm so happy I was wrong. I don't what you are planning to do with Naomi and I understand if you'll kill Emily here. even I don't want you too but its your story. I'm only here to enjoy the ride... and I know you'll give a good one

oh. my. god. I was really excited when I stumble upon this fic and I thought it was like a one shot. but noooo and I'm so happy I was wrong. I don't what you are planning to do with Naomi and I understand if you'll kill Emily here. even I don't want you too but its your story. I'm only here to enjoy the ride... and I know you'll give a good one
7/15/2015 c2
9mswitsend
Kind of twisted and freaky but it has potential. Would like to see where you take this.

Kind of twisted and freaky but it has potential. Would like to see where you take this.
7/8/2015 c2 Tiffythetitan
Hi, meant to leave this review last night...
I was just re-reading this a few weeks ago and was not expecting an update so very pleasantly surprised to see a new chapter and your take on Emily being the one person that can ruin Naomi. Very different take...lol.
Hi, meant to leave this review last night...
I was just re-reading this a few weeks ago and was not expecting an update so very pleasantly surprised to see a new chapter and your take on Emily being the one person that can ruin Naomi. Very different take...lol.
7/7/2015 c2 Guest
Oh thank you for more... Had wondered what would happen
Enjoying this a lot... Your writing is good... Looking forward to more...
Oh thank you for more... Had wondered what would happen
Enjoying this a lot... Your writing is good... Looking forward to more...
7/7/2015 c2
6PlatinumRosewood
Oh my fucking god I literally did a double take when I saw there was a notification of a new chapter. I was so fucking excited I dropped everything to read it and I was not disappointed. I am extremely eager for more and a chapter well done.
Although I can't help but hope you trick us and make Emily not die, I know it's your story. But like a Bonnie and Clyde romance murder? Or Stockholms? Anyway. Fanfuckingtastic chaper seriously this stories biggest fan
Cheers,
Rosey xoxoxo

Oh my fucking god I literally did a double take when I saw there was a notification of a new chapter. I was so fucking excited I dropped everything to read it and I was not disappointed. I am extremely eager for more and a chapter well done.
Although I can't help but hope you trick us and make Emily not die, I know it's your story. But like a Bonnie and Clyde romance murder? Or Stockholms? Anyway. Fanfuckingtastic chaper seriously this stories biggest fan
Cheers,
Rosey xoxoxo
7/7/2015 c2 fucksakesangie
I always thought this was a one shot but I'm glad it's not it's pretty interesting it differs from all the other naomily stories (:
I always thought this was a one shot but I'm glad it's not it's pretty interesting it differs from all the other naomily stories (:
5/30/2014 c1 fucksakesangie
Is it wrong for me to wish this was a full story?
Wonderful job, I've quite enjoyed this (:
Is it wrong for me to wish this was a full story?
Wonderful job, I've quite enjoyed this (:
3/3/2014 c1 Guest
This was brilliant! Can you write more please?
This was brilliant! Can you write more please?
2/11/2014 c1
43garden-nomes
Very dark, and reminiscent of silence of the lambs.
And if Naomi was a psychotic killer, hell. I'd let her kill me! lol
Needs a run through with spell check, though... Just sayin! I know I'm not perfect with typos either, but your misspelling of 'psychotic' really sticks out.
Just a friendly criticism, and well intended!
:-)
Loved it, though. Very much so.

Very dark, and reminiscent of silence of the lambs.
And if Naomi was a psychotic killer, hell. I'd let her kill me! lol
Needs a run through with spell check, though... Just sayin! I know I'm not perfect with typos either, but your misspelling of 'psychotic' really sticks out.
Just a friendly criticism, and well intended!
:-)
Loved it, though. Very much so.
1/24/2014 c1
17KeffyRules
Well that was...creepy in so many ways but I really liked it. Would love to see more of this Naomi despite the chills she sent down my spine.

Well that was...creepy in so many ways but I really liked it. Would love to see more of this Naomi despite the chills she sent down my spine.