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for when the future meets the past!

1/23 c1 67Ugly-Duckling123
Not being rude, just a suggestion...

Put the lines of the different speakers, on different rows instead of having them all clumped together in on paragraph.

- When they're all together, a reader might think a second lot of speech is still coming from the first speaker.
4/22/2019 c6 Toby Hark
I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!
1/27/2018 c6 Ash forever
Next chapter plz
I can't wait
9/1/2016 c6 2Sin Danimal
Please continue this story is really good
9/1/2016 c6 Hikari Kishimura
This is very interesting~! I love it~!
6/14/2016 c5 5ProcrastinationIsMyCrime
Things are warming up. Love it.
6/14/2016 c4 ProcrastinationIsMyCrime
Oooo a surprise visit from Mewtwo, nice one.
6/14/2016 c3 ProcrastinationIsMyCrime
Awesome work. I love the way this story is unraveling.
6/14/2016 c2 ProcrastinationIsMyCrime
Nice cover up Ash, looked the part too.
6/14/2016 c1 ProcrastinationIsMyCrime
Nice start. I look forward to the rest.
6/9/2014 c2 8aura gurdian
i want more if this is what chapter 2 is like i sure can not wan't for chapte and how ever many more please make more.
6/2/2014 c6 3Plasma57
Doesn't Dawn debut in the Diamond & Pearl series, instead of the Advanced Generation series? Great story, please update soon.
6/2/2014 c6 thor94
interesting.
I hope ash will escape from shadow.
6/2/2014 c6 12Scarlet Ruby Rose
Cool :)
6/2/2014 c6 3Asutorido
Finally someone tells ash he died T.T so sad just by remembering it
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