1/23 c1 67Ugly-Duckling123
Not being rude, just a suggestion...

Put the lines of the different speakers, on different rows instead of having them all clumped together in on paragraph.

- When they're all together, a reader might think a second lot of speech is still coming from the first speaker.

1/27/2018 c6 Ash forever
Next chapter plz
I can't wait

9/1/2016 c6 Hikari Kishimura
This is very interesting~! I love it~!

6/14/2016 c4 ProcrastinationIsMyCrime
Oooo a surprise visit from Mewtwo, nice one.

6/14/2016 c2 ProcrastinationIsMyCrime
Nice cover up Ash, looked the part too.

6/9/2014 c2 8aura gurdian
i want more if this is what chapter 2 is like i sure can not wan't for chapte and how ever many more please make more.

6/2/2014 c6 thor94
interesting.
I hope ash will escape from shadow.

6/2/2014 c6 3Asutorido
Finally someone tells ash he died T.T so sad just by remembering it