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6/27/2020 c1 H-Nala
It can clearly be only 1 him that she would refer to that way.
11/6/2016 c1 Guest
Lovely oneshot. This was better than your first two SB stories - more polished. Just some typos if you're interested though. It should be "in his beautiful green eyes that showerED heR" (not "shower he"). Thanks for sharing
10/1/2014 c1 mooirok
This is beautiful story
9/28/2014 c1 Taormina
I loved this story! Follow it please.
5/21/2014 c1 105claraowl
Aw. :D
1/19/2014 c1 Guest
I like very good job
1/17/2014 c1 2Erilin-chan
Awwww, cute! It's like a poem cross story. I wouldn't say your writing style is rough, it's short, but that's no bad thing IMO. No problem with the 'him's', only I think there might be a typo "his beautiful green eyes that shower he with [blah]",should the second 'he', be 'her'?
1/17/2014 c1 Zero Andreasen
Woah. Do you mean Ren, by the way you described the "him" I hope so. Please hurry and put the next chapter up! Please!
1/17/2014 c1 2amusingmurff
Election Law! I'm taking that this semester too, I can understand why you'd drift away haha. Also, cute little ficlet idea, I'm a sucker for fluffy Kuon/Kyoko. :)
1/16/2014 c1 14Daredevil fangirl
I really like this! Short but sweet. It would have made a great prologue too. Hope you continue it. :)

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