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7/19/2020 c10 In-Watermelon-Sugar
I love the emotion in this, how the thoughts and reactions feel true to each of the characters. And the “hang in there, Joan” at the end was PERFECT! So many feels!
6/21/2020 c10 Guest
I was wrong
6/20/2020 c1 Guest
Im so exited to read this Like my two favorite Disney couples in the same fic?! I in for a treat
12/5/2019 c10 5MPRockstar16
I haven’t read Fanfic or logged into my account in ages, however I felt compelled to write you a review on this fantastic story. Honestly, I’m borderline demanding a sequel, such a great read with each chapter better than the last. The attention to detail is incredible, and you have captured the characters SO well. It didn’t feel like I was reading a fanfiction, it honestly felt canon which is a HUGE compliment towards your writing style. The carefully organized narrative you created is wonderful, and your character development was some of the best I’ve read. Truly superior work, I love how you not only captured each character’s essence but also incorporated their past traumas and used them slaying their demons to drive the plot. Such an impressive piece of work, and it would be a SHAME not to write a follow up! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE consider! With the Tangled sequel series on TV, and Frozen 2 being released there’s TONS of new stories to be told about these four! Would love for Kristoff and Eugene’s chemistry to be explored a little more, and even the chemistry between Kristoff and Rapunzel to be examined. Seriously one of the best fanfiction stories I’ve EVER read. Bravo!
2/25/2019 c10 30StarlingChild4
Congratulations. This is the ONLY good threesome/foursome fic I've read (and certainly the only one on my faves). Even before the smuttiness, I loved the build-up of the relationships/friendships, Kristoff's initial distaste (and not because of the fact that Rapunzel is a woman, but because Anna was unfaithful), and all the little details of emotions, from past trauma to regular relationship fluff/angst.

I must confess, I favorited this years ago, I think when the last couple of chapters weren't up yet, and I never got around to finishing it until last night, when I read it start to finish. I'm glad I read it again, though some parts gave me mixed feelings, mainly in the smut department. Not necessarily because they're Disney characters (like, pfft, please, Frozen smut is what ultimately made me fall in love with fanfiction, back in 2014), but because I didn't quite expect the literal three/foursome in the end. I was actually expecting more of a "switch-off," where the characters all sleep with each other, but only in pairs. Thus, admittedly, the foursome kinda weirded me out initially. But please bear in mind that that's ONLY because of my preference, that I'm personally not into polygamy in the slightest, NOT because I judge others for it. I appreciated how you went through the stages of everyone learning to accept their new boundaries (especially Kristoff), so it made that final smut scene more bearable to read for me. So, thank you for that! :)

Also, I absolutely LOVED how baffled the trolls were with Kristoff's dilemma! XD Love experts wouldn't quite understand societal ideals, because to them, love is universal and should be shared in every possible way. Their scene was a very nice touch.

And while I stated earlier that polygamy isn't for me, I still firmly believe that it is very possible to love more than one person at a time. It's just a matter of how you choose to act on your feelings. I love how you address that, especially with Eugene's feelings, with him refusing to forbid Rapunzel anything (within reason, I imagine), and how everyone's past traumas all lead them to desiring more than just conventional love, because they all have "much too much to share." You do a good job convincing someone like me to accept and embrace the unconventional relationships of others (assuming, of course, all parties are of age and consenting).

So, overall, great job! I know my squeamishness may sound like I didn't enjoy your fic, but that's not true. I just needed time to formulate my thoughts properly lol. Great job writing the characters' voices, emotional moments, and describing their trauma (I particularly loved how the girls, including Elsa, deal with triggers). Well done! :)
4/26/2017 c10 meridaqueenofdunbroch
holy shiiiiiiit man im tearing up this was so great. i love them all so much. ugh. perfect.
4/25/2017 c1 meridaqueenofdunbroch
hsdfgdhjkl this is so cute i love all of them
4/24/2016 c1 40Concolor44
What?! Only 84 reviews? Why the living, flaming HELL doesn't this fantastic piece of literary art have more reviews? It's been up for TWO YEARS!
4/24/2016 c10 Concolor44
Seriously, deeply satisfying. This is one of the most (if not THE most) elegant, well-written, beautifully choreographed, freaking REAL Frozen/Tangled crossovers I've ever read. I blazed through it. I am sorry, in a way, that I didn't leave a review on every chapter, but DAMN, son! I couldn't stop! The story wouldn't let me!

I'm not sure what was the best part...
The scintillating dialogue?
The liberal sprinkling of bon mots?
The achingly TRUE emotion?
The unbelievably easy reading style?
The fact that you seem to expect a certain level of intelligence in your readers?
The inevitability of their love?

This gets slammed into Favorites SO HARD! As I've observed a few times before, I wish there were a Super-Favorites category. In this case, all I can do is add your mind-blowing tale to my Highly Recommended Stories on my Profile, which I will do post-haste.

Thank you, thank you, thank you! So much!
4/24/2015 c4 artilyon-rand
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
4/24/2015 c1 artilyon-rand
tnow that was just adorable
3/15/2015 c10 24Taivasalla
Really lovely writing. You capture tone and character voices impressively, and the joy and love in this really shines through.
4/22/2014 c9 9stillslightlynerdy
So, I have been loving this right along. The feeling is good. Your voices are wonderful. I find myself falling for Rapunzel as quickly as Anna. The warmth that suffuses this story, even when people are being grumpy and jealous (yeah, I'm talking about you Kristof) is amazing. But this ... this is the moment where I laughed out load. "walk up to girls in the marketplace and ask if they'd like to spend some quality time with the queen." And Anna thinking it might be a good idea. Marvelous! Just marvelous!
3/29/2014 c10 9FrozenRose1
I think I might have to reread this to appreciate it in all its glory. All the little details you put in, the way you write these five characters, highlighting their similarities and differences... is pretty awesome.

And please do write that Elsa-centric sequel. There is not enough good Queer!Elsa fanfiction out there that's not Elsanna. (Unless you were planning on making it Elsanna?)

Anyway, I'm sorry that this is over, because I did really enjoy the ride. Even as smutty as that ride may have gotten at times.
3/28/2014 c10 Minirowan
This was a nice ride, I enjoyed reading every chapter. You did a great job developing their relationships and devoted a lot of time to all of the characters, not just a select few.

I don't like yuri, but I'm sorely tempted to read that sequel about Elsa just because of your great writing. I know you'll do more than a great job with Elsa's relationship.
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