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1/17/2014 c1 80musicnotes093
Ooh, what a wonderful way to tell a story! Your wording on everything is lovely. It starts powerfully, and the suspense and mystery keeps me at the edge of my seat. It really makes me wonder where Leo is and why he was there. What *had* happened? If the rest of the family is safe, I hope they find him in time. If they're not, I hope Leo figures everything out before it's too late.

Great job! I am looking forward to what happen next!
1/17/2014 c1 5AngelGoneDevil69
OMG, I am so into this! This has got to be the most interesting thing I've read in a while. Plus, Leo is my fav character, but sadly most stories focus on the rats. Even the show has demoted him to mostly comic relief. It saddens me. How did Leo get there? Does he somehow have uncontrollable abilities/ powers or is this an invention mishap? Will he be ok? PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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