for Hearts Dream Deeply2/4/2014 c9 annabell
wow...can't wait for jacob to kiss her...n u r doin great
wow...can't wait for jacob to kiss her...n u r doin great
2/4/2014 c9 Amber
please continue writing this is so good
please continue writing this is so good
2/4/2014 c9 jasperhaker23
Even though this story is wonderful,
maybe you should not write it with a rating of
M. I can tell you are young given by your style of writing.
although I like it, you should be careful when writing this stuff.
What am I saying? Well, as you may know, not everyone is as anyone would seem. I could be wrong and you're actually a
rational, 25 year old chick living in her mom's basement. I now sound stupid, but I am just saying this as a heads up.
See what I am trying to say? The net's dangerous.
Your story is awesome though, I like how you take apart
our favorite wolf's life to make some connections to Bella.
Unless you are a dead author, I hope to see more.
Even though this story is wonderful,
maybe you should not write it with a rating of
M. I can tell you are young given by your style of writing.
although I like it, you should be careful when writing this stuff.
What am I saying? Well, as you may know, not everyone is as anyone would seem. I could be wrong and you're actually a
rational, 25 year old chick living in her mom's basement. I now sound stupid, but I am just saying this as a heads up.
See what I am trying to say? The net's dangerous.
Your story is awesome though, I like how you take apart
our favorite wolf's life to make some connections to Bella.
Unless you are a dead author, I hope to see more.
2/3/2014 c7 Omgtwilightgurl3
Wow, that is sooooo amazingg... I wish I could have written this story not YOU! Keep up the great work... Everyone watch Elemental Gelade!
Wow, that is sooooo amazingg... I wish I could have written this story not YOU! Keep up the great work... Everyone watch Elemental Gelade!
2/5/2014 c10 MysticTopaz6293
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Why did you have to end the chapter there?! It was getting so good! Please update soon or I may just die!
MysticTopaz
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Why did you have to end the chapter there?! It was getting so good! Please update soon or I may just die!
MysticTopaz
2/5/2014 c10 
1Yazlee7313
Is Edward with Volturi or Volturi is really killing them? If not who really killing the Cullen? Ooh lala hope she on birth control lol GREAT job I can't wait to read more thanks u for updating
1Yazlee7313Is Edward with Volturi or Volturi is really killing them? If not who really killing the Cullen? Ooh lala hope she on birth control lol GREAT job I can't wait to read more thanks u for updating
2/4/2014 c9 7ChameleonRose
I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter and I don't think it fair of you to dangle them finally be able to be together in front of us like that. Please update soon.
7ChameleonRoseI love your story and can't wait for the next chapter and I don't think it fair of you to dangle them finally be able to be together in front of us like that. Please update soon.
2/4/2014 c9 MysticTopaz6293
OMG! Please update! I'm gonna go ballistic if I can't read the next chapter soon!
MysticTopaz
OMG! Please update! I'm gonna go ballistic if I can't read the next chapter soon!
MysticTopaz
2/4/2014 c9 5laugh0ften2012
Gah how cruel to cut off right at the moment things are about to get hotband heavy lol! Great update def. will be waiting eagerly for the next one!
5laugh0ften2012Gah how cruel to cut off right at the moment things are about to get hotband heavy lol! Great update def. will be waiting eagerly for the next one!
2/4/2014 c9 1Yazlee7313
U meanie hiw u going to do that to Jacob n us lol GREAT job I can't wait to read how they going to react to each other after so many yr of him of him been wolf? Oh please update ASAP PLEASE thanks u for updating
1Yazlee7313U meanie hiw u going to do that to Jacob n us lol GREAT job I can't wait to read how they going to react to each other after so many yr of him of him been wolf? Oh please update ASAP PLEASE thanks u for updating
1/30/2014 c8 guess
please update soon...waiting for jacob to turn back into human...
please update soon...waiting for jacob to turn back into human...