for Hearts Dream Deeply2/1/2014 c8 Killerqueen15
So cute! I love this idea for a fic and find it fascinating exploring his struggle of waiting for her. I hope the vampires don't pose a large threat. Great story so far! Keep it up!
So cute! I love this idea for a fic and find it fascinating exploring his struggle of waiting for her. I hope the vampires don't pose a large threat. Great story so far! Keep it up!
1/31/2014 c8 
1hufflepuffpride21
Its so amazing how they both feel so strongly for one another. I think that makes their imprint so much stronger because they can just be in each other's company. Although when Bella does turn 18...thats going to be a really good 18th
1hufflepuffpride21Its so amazing how they both feel so strongly for one another. I think that makes their imprint so much stronger because they can just be in each other's company. Although when Bella does turn 18...thats going to be a really good 18th
1/31/2014 c8 1Yazlee7313
Alice did not tell Bella that oh f no. Is Alice now going to help Edward is she? Someone must have a pic of Jacob when he was human right? Great job hopes u can update soon thank you for updating
1Yazlee7313Alice did not tell Bella that oh f no. Is Alice now going to help Edward is she? Someone must have a pic of Jacob when he was human right? Great job hopes u can update soon thank you for updating
1/29/2014 c6 Yazlee7313
So Alice is or Edward dead n the volturi are coming to get Bella? Oh great job please update ASAP PLEASE thanks u for updating
So Alice is or Edward dead n the volturi are coming to get Bella? Oh great job please update ASAP PLEASE thanks u for updating
1/26/2014 c5 1hufflepuffpride21
Thanx for clearing up about her parents...sooo Edward is armless GOOD! 15...wow how does Jake's wolf and the man trapped inside maintain it...after all she has developed into most of her womanly curves...cant wait to read more
1hufflepuffpride21Thanx for clearing up about her parents...sooo Edward is armless GOOD! 15...wow how does Jake's wolf and the man trapped inside maintain it...after all she has developed into most of her womanly curves...cant wait to read more
1/26/2014 c5 1Yazlee7313
Oh wow I should know Edward would have kill her mom n dad stupid me lol did they get to kill him or he got a chance to xscape? Great job hopes u can update soon thank you for updating
1Yazlee7313Oh wow I should know Edward would have kill her mom n dad stupid me lol did they get to kill him or he got a chance to xscape? Great job hopes u can update soon thank you for updating
1/23/2014 c4 guest
wow...this is so great...hope jake can turn back into wolf when bella is sixteen
wow...this is so great...hope jake can turn back into wolf when bella is sixteen
1/22/2014 c3 Miiss anon
I love-love-LOVE this story! I love little bella she so cute, I just imagine a little bella sleeping by huge wolf jake. Sighs it's too adorable. I also love protective jake. I can't believe Sam wouldn't trust jake around his own mate. I hope jake tears edward to bits. How dare edward kidnap a little girl! And bad guy Alice? I can't wait for your next update!
I love-love-LOVE this story! I love little bella she so cute, I just imagine a little bella sleeping by huge wolf jake. Sighs it's too adorable. I also love protective jake. I can't believe Sam wouldn't trust jake around his own mate. I hope jake tears edward to bits. How dare edward kidnap a little girl! And bad guy Alice? I can't wait for your next update!
1/23/2014 c4 Yazlee7313
So Bella live with Jacob outside? Is Bella parents still looking for her? Where Edward hiding all this years? Great job hopes u can update soon thank you for updating
So Bella live with Jacob outside? Is Bella parents still looking for her? Where Edward hiding all this years? Great job hopes u can update soon thank you for updating
1/22/2014 c3 Yazlee7313
Very interesting story i can't wait to read what going to happen next please update as soon you can
Very interesting story i can't wait to read what going to happen next please update as soon you can
1/20/2014 c2 Guest
Great start can't wait to read more
Great start can't wait to read more
1/20/2014 c2 RainDancin
This is pretty good so far. I admit that I wondered how you where going too do with the pairing. But now I think that it makes a little more sense.
This is pretty good so far. I admit that I wondered how you where going too do with the pairing. But now I think that it makes a little more sense.