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9/6/2017 c1 13ZadArchie
This story is written in second-person, making the reader a character in the story. By making the reader a character in the story, it makes the story interactive. Interactive content is not permitted on this site per the Rules & Guidelines we all agreed to when we signed up for accounts. To avoid this issue, simply rewrite the story in first or third person with a generic OC name. Take these suggestions into consideration as they will help you avoid issues with the rules in the future. Please understand, I say what I say in the spirit of what this site is about: making good stories great, if not brilliant.

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Zad
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5/1/2017 c2 MeghannaStarsong
This is an interesting concept, a kind of choose your own adventure. I'm digging this so far. .

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