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69Ariyah
That was fabulous! The imagery was spot-on and the flow was just lovely.
Ariel_of_Narnia
69AriyahThat was fabulous! The imagery was spot-on and the flow was just lovely.
Ariel_of_Narnia
4/18/2016 c1 1Foozeezoos
Great poem! The last lines were amazing. You did a great job at showing the sadness that the dwarves felt watching Thorin being consumed by the dragon sickness, and also the brotherly bond between Fili and Kili. I'm so glad I decided to read this :)
1FoozeezoosGreat poem! The last lines were amazing. You did a great job at showing the sadness that the dwarves felt watching Thorin being consumed by the dragon sickness, and also the brotherly bond between Fili and Kili. I'm so glad I decided to read this :)
1/11/2015 c1 JaeRae
Wow, I really love the last four lines.
Wow, I really love the last four lines.
1/20/2014 c1 Guest
Great, reminds me of Kipling
Great, reminds me of Kipling
1/19/2014 c1 5smiles811998
Aww this was beautiful, and I'm not a huge fan of poetry. But honestly this is one of the cutest stories I've ever read. Good job :)
5smiles811998Aww this was beautiful, and I'm not a huge fan of poetry. But honestly this is one of the cutest stories I've ever read. Good job :)