for Transformers: Second Chances1/27 c2 
8EclipseFirelight
This chapter has a confusion between the sisters, often calling Nirvana "Rose" and Rose "Pixel". I don't know what you're going to do with that, but I suggest rereading the chapter and fixing it as you go.
8EclipseFirelightThis chapter has a confusion between the sisters, often calling Nirvana "Rose" and Rose "Pixel". I don't know what you're going to do with that, but I suggest rereading the chapter and fixing it as you go.
10/2/2021 c13 Barricade911
at least barricade felt sorry for rose and didn't rape her im glad he was gentle with her same with soundwave as well normally they wouldn't be gentle but i guess this is a one time thing
at least barricade felt sorry for rose and didn't rape her im glad he was gentle with her same with soundwave as well normally they wouldn't be gentle but i guess this is a one time thing
10/2/2021 c12 Barricade911
at least soundwave was nice enough to fix her ribs and for a decepticon hes not so bad
at least soundwave was nice enough to fix her ribs and for a decepticon hes not so bad
10/2/2021 c11 Barricade911
well looks like barricade and soundwave care about those two girls and barricade is mad about what happened to rose
well looks like barricade and soundwave care about those two girls and barricade is mad about what happened to rose
10/2/2021 c9 Barricade911
well shit and i believe that nirvana and drift make a good couple and so does ironhide and rose and why does barricade have to be such a damn creep and a child predator? he literally blown his cover alright
well shit and i believe that nirvana and drift make a good couple and so does ironhide and rose and why does barricade have to be such a damn creep and a child predator? he literally blown his cover alright
10/2/2021 c4 Barricade911
the grammar needs fixing and i just noticed that this is much more different than the first transformers movie itself
the grammar needs fixing and i just noticed that this is much more different than the first transformers movie itself
5/13/2015 c14 Secret
WHAT!Tell me the sparkling isn't the two girls PLS! But rather a thing that occurred when the two girls essentially made an EMP! I swear, if it is(OMP TRIPLE I's!) the girls as that sparkling I swear...
WHAT!Tell me the sparkling isn't the two girls PLS! But rather a thing that occurred when the two girls essentially made an EMP! I swear, if it is(OMP TRIPLE I's!) the girls as that sparkling I swear...