for A New way to Battle Aizen4/24/2014 c4 guest
Pls continue:)
Can u write longer chapters?
Pls continue:)
Can u write longer chapters?
3/25/2014 c1 KristinaYoung
I really enjoyed reading this chapter! :) So much detail! Love it! :)
I really enjoyed reading this chapter! :) So much detail! Love it! :)
3/2/2014 c2 
2metsfan101
Now thats better. I'm going to follow this story to see wheere it going, cause I think this is going in a good direction
2metsfan101Now thats better. I'm going to follow this story to see wheere it going, cause I think this is going in a good direction
3/2/2014 c1 metsfan101
Wow i enjoyed this chapter a lot, one piece of advice though would be to separate this into a couple of paragraphs
Wow i enjoyed this chapter a lot, one piece of advice though would be to separate this into a couple of paragraphs