
9/24/2018 c1 Guest
Wow XD
Wow XD
10/24/2015 c1
1DannyFentonPhantomPhan98
I like how you wrote this. I'm sort of in a mind-tightening, fan-mode right now. HtTYD is honestly one of my favs. (Along with RotG.) I have way too many Fandoms right now. And I want to write fanfictions for them all, but ehh.
Anyway. I quite enjoyed this. I'd love to read more of your works. (DP FOR LIFE... . . Heh.)

I like how you wrote this. I'm sort of in a mind-tightening, fan-mode right now. HtTYD is honestly one of my favs. (Along with RotG.) I have way too many Fandoms right now. And I want to write fanfictions for them all, but ehh.
Anyway. I quite enjoyed this. I'd love to read more of your works. (DP FOR LIFE... . . Heh.)
9/14/2015 c1 The Amazing Cat
:) love it. :)
:) love it. :)
8/18/2015 c1
2Irina Hunter
This would be the perfect place to insert the song Your Fault from Into The Woods.

This would be the perfect place to insert the song Your Fault from Into The Woods.
1/23/2014 c1
14Tasermon's Partner
This is very good, and mostly in-character, with nice character interactions as well, but it's also a bit random. It's good as a meant mostly as a relatively short one-shot with a just a bit of the regular slice-of-life view of a small problem the riders encounter (rather than the epic adventures they go through every week).
However, if (and only if) you wanted to, I think you could also have expanded this a bit to include a more dramatic conflict resolution or some character interaction.
But that's really all dependent on what type of stories you want to write.

This is very good, and mostly in-character, with nice character interactions as well, but it's also a bit random. It's good as a meant mostly as a relatively short one-shot with a just a bit of the regular slice-of-life view of a small problem the riders encounter (rather than the epic adventures they go through every week).
However, if (and only if) you wanted to, I think you could also have expanded this a bit to include a more dramatic conflict resolution or some character interaction.
But that's really all dependent on what type of stories you want to write.