1/18/2018 c1 Guest
That was amazing!
Thank you so much XD
That was amazing!
Thank you so much XD
5/15/2016 c1 Toshiuki
Omg I laughed so freaking hard I had to go to the bathroom in the middle XD
Omg I laughed so freaking hard I had to go to the bathroom in the middle XD
11/24/2015 c1 7Grayluisawesome
You are seriously so amazing. This was hilarious. XDDD You really need to write more of them.
You are seriously so amazing. This was hilarious. XDDD You really need to write more of them.
10/23/2015 c1 shubhi
o my god !That was something really funny. I love it ...Want to read more i am not going to sy more just WRITE MORE:)
o my god !That was something really funny. I love it ...Want to read more i am not going to sy more just WRITE MORE:)
3/1/2015 c1 Nashiru Miharu
Pahahahahah! Oh my, poor Takano! He's going to suffocate that way! xD Ok ok, he was begging for it. It's true that he helped Onodera with the pain, but poor Ritsu! It must have been terrible embarrassing and Takano still make fun of him? That's too cruel ahahah x3 so yeah, he kind of deserved it u.u
Oh! And I looved the way in the final you said " Disclaimer:Actions and/or situations depicted in this fan ficmay ormay not have been inspired by a true story." AHAHAHAHAHAH OMG MY BELLY! *laugh attack* I can only imagine what might have happened!
You know, you could continue this story and make a 4th for the saga :D What do you say? Good idea, right? ;) hehehe n.n
One more thing! Cerberus is a man or a woman? Because I was thinking about that and I discovered that I don't know o.o oops n-n"
Well, I really really LOOOOVED your story! It was really perfect! Amazing *-*
I hope we will see each other again sometime soon! :D
Take care!
Kissuuuuus
Pahahahahah! Oh my, poor Takano! He's going to suffocate that way! xD Ok ok, he was begging for it. It's true that he helped Onodera with the pain, but poor Ritsu! It must have been terrible embarrassing and Takano still make fun of him? That's too cruel ahahah x3 so yeah, he kind of deserved it u.u
Oh! And I looved the way in the final you said " Disclaimer:Actions and/or situations depicted in this fan ficmay ormay not have been inspired by a true story." AHAHAHAHAHAH OMG MY BELLY! *laugh attack* I can only imagine what might have happened!
You know, you could continue this story and make a 4th for the saga :D What do you say? Good idea, right? ;) hehehe n.n
One more thing! Cerberus is a man or a woman? Because I was thinking about that and I discovered that I don't know o.o oops n-n"
Well, I really really LOOOOVED your story! It was really perfect! Amazing *-*
I hope we will see each other again sometime soon! :D
Take care!
Kissuuuuus
7/27/2014 c1 Guest
Haha priceless! Are you a nursing or medical student? You know so much about the human body! It's impressive :)
Once again, BeAuTiFuL work and I adore your sense of humor and the way you write!
Haha priceless! Are you a nursing or medical student? You know so much about the human body! It's impressive :)
Once again, BeAuTiFuL work and I adore your sense of humor and the way you write!
7/21/2014 c1 FanficLover577
I absolutely loved this sequel! 3
I just wish we know what exactly Ritsu did in the end under the coverlet.
I absolutely loved this sequel! 3
I just wish we know what exactly Ritsu did in the end under the coverlet.
2/11/2014 c1 Guest
Oh god was NOT seeing that one coming! XDDDD
OH MAN I laughed way too hard for my own good. That was an amazing sequel Tentei.t-san!
Oh god was NOT seeing that one coming! XDDDD
OH MAN I laughed way too hard for my own good. That was an amazing sequel Tentei.t-san!
2/8/2014 c1 63AZ1087653
Well, this is definitely a good way to pass the time. Good grief, I knew that was going to happen. Kimchi does the same thing to me, but I've not problems with letting it out. LOL It'd be nice if more people wrote about bodily functions, especially since a man in these stories sticks their dick into the same place that shit and fart comes from. LOL
And one up on Onodera for pulling that one on Takano. Classic!
Well, this is definitely a good way to pass the time. Good grief, I knew that was going to happen. Kimchi does the same thing to me, but I've not problems with letting it out. LOL It'd be nice if more people wrote about bodily functions, especially since a man in these stories sticks their dick into the same place that shit and fart comes from. LOL
And one up on Onodera for pulling that one on Takano. Classic!
1/27/2014 c1 Guest
I laughed too much at, "Ritsu, did you just fart?" Seriously good laugh of the day.
I laughed too much at, "Ritsu, did you just fart?" Seriously good laugh of the day.
1/25/2014 c1 b.i.p.o.l.a.r
Great, this was a "windy" hella funny story. Really loved it, it was a very light read and it was the simplicity which made it so freacking awesome :))) . Really glad i found this. :)
Ohhhh gawd *still lmao*
Great, this was a "windy" hella funny story. Really loved it, it was a very light read and it was the simplicity which made it so freacking awesome :))) . Really glad i found this. :)
Ohhhh gawd *still lmao*
1/26/2014 c1 12hayunaki
OMG BAHAHA i cant stop...too much laughing, oh god i can't breathe XDDDDD oh man and Takano gets some payback after XD oh my god made my day XD
and for that ginger oil thing...my mum never used that on me lol, what she did was to get baby oil, rub it on my stomach and press her hand into my stomach and push the 'air' inside my stomach lower so that i could fart it out XD or push it up so i could burp ahaha XD
anywho, love the story! and Takano's such a little devil ;)
OMG BAHAHA i cant stop...too much laughing, oh god i can't breathe XDDDDD oh man and Takano gets some payback after XD oh my god made my day XD
and for that ginger oil thing...my mum never used that on me lol, what she did was to get baby oil, rub it on my stomach and press her hand into my stomach and push the 'air' inside my stomach lower so that i could fart it out XD or push it up so i could burp ahaha XD
anywho, love the story! and Takano's such a little devil ;)