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8/26/2015 c1 Kkadijakk
One last time is a good song for this story amazing.
8/4/2015 c1 kkadijakk
omfg that was the best song fic i ever read i usually dont like them but this was great good god this was amazing.
7/27/2015 c1 2Kori Raelyn
Aww! I love the ending. It was so touching and well-written. Keep it up!

I'd really appreciate it if you would check out my story that I am writing. It's a Kori/Dick pairing so...yeah xD. If you do, please tell me what you think because I value your opinion since you are a great writer!

Kori. R
12/29/2014 c1 charadron
I have to say it, when I read "Barbara" something really stung. I have always shipped Dick and Starfire, and was greatly upset with the Barbara Gordon thing (in the comics, I mean). Thanks for making him justice.
5/27/2014 c1 115mythica magic
Hii Since you reviewed my stories I thought I'd return the favor ;) First of all I really like how you showed the desperation and sadness plaguing Kori, you conveyed her emotions very well.
The only two slight criticisms I have are that in the second paragraph you use the same words a few too many times such as; dark ally, moonlight and the hill. (You can ignore me on this though as its not my strong suit to describe things) But a few different ways to describe the location should fix that.
The other thing is that while Kori doesn't forgive him right away, when she suddenly says 'I forgive you' it seems a little hasty. I'm not sure what can be done as an alternative though so nvm me XD
Overall though I liked the tone of the fanfic and it was very good at conveying emotions. Well done! xxxxxx
2/5/2014 c1 catspats31
The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of Daughter's "Winter", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.

catspats31
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1/23/2014 c1 1Sweetums14
That was really cute...abd sad...in a way? I loved it! :D:D:D:D:P:P:P:P:):):):)3333

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