
10/1/2014 c1
23Ravenclaw Midnight Blue
Very nice! Well written.
Just a little editing needed. For example: 'she tried in vain to pull her self out of the car...' (should be 'herself').

Very nice! Well written.
Just a little editing needed. For example: 'she tried in vain to pull her self out of the car...' (should be 'herself').