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9/4/2016 c1 4Fangirling is now a job
The feeeeeeeeellllllllssssssssss
7/7/2016 c1 anon
at the very end you said "their's" instead of "theirs," otherwise great job, i teared up a little! you are honestly probably one of the best writers for urinetown fics which are far and few between. i use fanfics for musicals as character studies and exploit them for alternate character interpretations, and this is amazing and really drives home the point of this musical, and how despite it being a silly parody musical and a piece of media it is still pretty depressing and sad and this is real to the characters and makes you feel you might need a lil more empathy for story characters rather than just taking their lives for your own personal entertainment. yes we do that and it does not matter, it's fictional, but what about the stories of in real life people that we practically view as fiction? "no, that could never happen to us" or "they do not matter," they were real people. anyways, i digress. i liked that ending point, and the implied lockstock/barrel.
1/29/2016 c1 17Rapunzella
Wow––I never thought there was any way to make a happy ending for anyone in this show, but you've done it, and beautifully! I love that your story has the same self-awareness the musical does. It's chilling to think of these people having to go on living in that bleak world after the musical ends. I'm glad at least for two of them, there are other stories to tell :)
8/11/2015 c1 Guest
I loved this story, it was so touching, and Little Sally and Lockstock were both true to character, which made it even better
8/2/2015 c1 3frankenkylee
I took part in my school's production of Urinetown: The Musical last year; it's one of my favorite musicals. I've always thought about what would have happened after the end, especially since Little Sally and Officer Lockstock were the only two left. This completely captured it. Beautifully written, emotional, and one of the best stories I've read.
7/24/2015 c1 Guest
Wow, I can't think of any words that would do justice to this masterpiece. This is so well written and gosh I don't think I've ever read a better fanfiction. Wonderful job!
4/11/2015 c1 36Scoobycool9 and LuckycoolHawk9
Wow, I love this piece a whole lot! I may not have ever seen the whole musical, but Little Sally always rang true to me. This piece was well written.
1/14/2015 c1 2Clara Bluescales
I just wanted to say thank you. It is amazing to realize there are other people in this world who love this show as much as I do. Thank you for using quotes from the show. It makes it so much more realistic. Your line about true signs of a great character is one of the truest things I have ever read. I for sure could never forget anyone (*Bobby*).
8/4/2014 c1 19Sierra.Gem
That was amazing! I was so glad that you didn't "fix" the ending, instead wrote a BEAUTIFUL addition!
2/15/2014 c1 1beththedreamer
This is too beautiful and sad. After seeing the show in London I just fell in love with this musical. This is probably the best urinetown fanfiction there is.
2/8/2014 c1 Guest
How dare you make me cry! Just kidding though I'm now in a pool of tears. This is very well writen and you captured little Sally's personality perfectly. You should defiantly write more urinetown fanfiction ...:)

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