
6/16/2014 c6 Kiren
Lol that was intense
Lol that was intense
6/16/2014 c6
2124 Lines
Haha I watched some of the game too. Can you do a Eight/Six ship next? I never saw it before so yeah. Nix, Navrina for the win! And for some reason I wouldn't mind Eight/Six either... I should wrote some of that...

Haha I watched some of the game too. Can you do a Eight/Six ship next? I never saw it before so yeah. Nix, Navrina for the win! And for some reason I wouldn't mind Eight/Six either... I should wrote some of that...
6/16/2014 c6 Guest
siiii mexico eso es todo seis! woah eso es mi mexico lindo y querido,
siiii mexico eso es todo seis! woah eso es mi mexico lindo y querido,
6/16/2014 c6
3scone104
YAYAYAY! THat was amazing :)))) I had a similar idea - but yours was just perfect! I think you wrote the characters perfectly and your commentary was much better than Phil Nevilles (god I swear I fell asleep). Argh that was great...
And I support England but only because I live here. They annoy me so much though...
Please update soon!

YAYAYAY! THat was amazing :)))) I had a similar idea - but yours was just perfect! I think you wrote the characters perfectly and your commentary was much better than Phil Nevilles (god I swear I fell asleep). Argh that was great...
And I support England but only because I live here. They annoy me so much though...
Please update soon!
5/7/2014 c4 IWishICouldBeLoric
I always ship Nine/Marina as Neven. As in, nine seven, because ppl say Navrina because eight won't fit. I like this story btw ;) I'm reading the strike of seven to, and that's great.
I always ship Nine/Marina as Neven. As in, nine seven, because ppl say Navrina because eight won't fit. I like this story btw ;) I'm reading the strike of seven to, and that's great.
3/19/2014 c5
3scone104
Aww, that was amazing :( So sad, so so sad, but amazingly written and I love AdamxOne so even better :)
Looking forward to more, and I love the other Garde's new life too!

Aww, that was amazing :( So sad, so so sad, but amazingly written and I love AdamxOne so even better :)
Looking forward to more, and I love the other Garde's new life too!
3/19/2014 c5
2TomFieldings
That was so sad and heartbreaking! How Adam has been hallucinating One all this while, it's just so sad... Wow. I love Adam and One, and you've portrayed them so well. Great job!

That was so sad and heartbreaking! How Adam has been hallucinating One all this while, it's just so sad... Wow. I love Adam and One, and you've portrayed them so well. Great job!
3/18/2014 c5 EpicLoric24
So bittersweet. It's nice. Oh One and Adam. They are my third fave ship in LL. :(
So sad that One is Gone. Poor Adam.
Nice story!
Update soon :)
So bittersweet. It's nice. Oh One and Adam. They are my third fave ship in LL. :(
So sad that One is Gone. Poor Adam.
Nice story!
Update soon :)
3/16/2014 c5 I.wish.I.could.be.Number.Five
Aww this is really sad :( but really good too. Update soon! :D
Aww this is really sad :( but really good too. Update soon! :D
3/4/2014 c4 Guest
NIX NIX PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE:)
NIX NIX PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE:)
2/22/2014 c4 EpicLoric24
Well it's quite a romantic or rather sweet story.
Nine really did try. I wonder how Valentine's day will turn out if it was Nix or Navrina haha
Update soon.
I don't actually know if there should be a ship name for MarinaxNine since aponly few fanfics pair them and it seemed so far fetched from the series since there's Navrina and Ella/Six for Nine.
Well it's quite a romantic or rather sweet story.
Nine really did try. I wonder how Valentine's day will turn out if it was Nix or Navrina haha
Update soon.
I don't actually know if there should be a ship name for MarinaxNine since aponly few fanfics pair them and it seemed so far fetched from the series since there's Navrina and Ella/Six for Nine.
2/19/2014 c3 TomFieldings
Great work! I loved both these one-shots... Especially the Navrina! I really like how they went together.
Just one thing... They have Legacies, but you've given them a human background, like Eight's dad died of lung cancer... Where exactly are they? It's a little confusing. You should stick to one of them :)
Sorry, I won't read the next one because it's Marina/Nine and I hate reading those because it feels like I'm giving up on Eight... :(
But keep going! They're great!
Yours truly,
Tom.
Great work! I loved both these one-shots... Especially the Navrina! I really like how they went together.
Just one thing... They have Legacies, but you've given them a human background, like Eight's dad died of lung cancer... Where exactly are they? It's a little confusing. You should stick to one of them :)
Sorry, I won't read the next one because it's Marina/Nine and I hate reading those because it feels like I'm giving up on Eight... :(
But keep going! They're great!
Yours truly,
Tom.
2/18/2014 c4
4BananaLlama6
It was really funny! Poor nine, can't get anything right! You're a great writer and I really REALLY enjoyed reading this! Please update soon!
Could you do a Navrina one? I love them so much! :)

It was really funny! Poor nine, can't get anything right! You're a great writer and I really REALLY enjoyed reading this! Please update soon!
Could you do a Navrina one? I love them so much! :)