for The World's Strongest Man11/4/2018 c2 XenosTheTerraGod
I didn't even read the whole chapter but I saw some fruity shit from wanna in there and we don't do that here boi, that ain't allowed bruv. Gays are a problem of humanity
I didn't even read the whole chapter but I saw some fruity shit from wanna in there and we don't do that here boi, that ain't allowed bruv. Gays are a problem of humanity
10/30/2017 c18 
15gryphonsson
Oh, Coasting Through Life is the rewrite... I did wonder why they seemed so similar.
15gryphonssonOh, Coasting Through Life is the rewrite... I did wonder why they seemed so similar.
10/30/2017 c16 gryphonsson
It’s “before”, not “bee-four”, And it’s “still”, not “till”. That aside, love the fic, keep it up.
It’s “before”, not “bee-four”, And it’s “still”, not “till”. That aside, love the fic, keep it up.
10/30/2017 c4 gryphonsson
You keep typing “Let’s” as “Legs”. Figured you should know.
That aside, interesting fic so far!
You keep typing “Let’s” as “Legs”. Figured you should know.
That aside, interesting fic so far!
5/5/2017 c18 Winter's Folly
Thank you for admitting it. I was really confused. Glad to know I am not that out of sync with slang. I was also thinking it might be an author's quirk of yours.
Thank you for admitting it. I was really confused. Glad to know I am not that out of sync with slang. I was also thinking it might be an author's quirk of yours.
4/9/2017 c17 2BrawlBroMario
Why did you trash this story? I thought you were laying stuff out pretty well fixing all the wrongs in the ranma-verse, but you haven't updated in 2 years. I hope you come back to finish the story.
2BrawlBroMarioWhy did you trash this story? I thought you were laying stuff out pretty well fixing all the wrongs in the ranma-verse, but you haven't updated in 2 years. I hope you come back to finish the story.
10/8/2016 c5 3Azaira
Love the story so far.
The only thing bothering me is projected power levels.
100% toguro is insane in pure power, and I seriously doubt Ranma could be at that level at any point in his manga. Toguro carried an entire fighting ring on his shoulders... Not to mention that he doesn't fight with energy, but pure power. The conversion makes it pointless.
Anyways, I thin it might be better to have classified their power rankings instead.
3AzairaLove the story so far.
The only thing bothering me is projected power levels.
100% toguro is insane in pure power, and I seriously doubt Ranma could be at that level at any point in his manga. Toguro carried an entire fighting ring on his shoulders... Not to mention that he doesn't fight with energy, but pure power. The conversion makes it pointless.
Anyways, I thin it might be better to have classified their power rankings instead.
9/8/2016 c9 Guest
Your English is even worse than Shampoo's Japanese.
Your English is even worse than Shampoo's Japanese.
3/21/2016 c2 34Tellemicus Sundance
Ugh, seriously? Is this going to be another one of those 'accepting his feminine side' type of romances? YUCK!
34Tellemicus SundanceUgh, seriously? Is this going to be another one of those 'accepting his feminine side' type of romances? YUCK!
3/21/2016 c1 Tellemicus Sundance
Please, please, PLEASE tell me that pairing hint at the top of the page is a mistake or something! While I have no problem with most of them, Ranma-chan/Yusuke is just DISGUSTING! What's the big deal about gender-bender romances like this? Ugh! I hope (BEG!) that you change your mind on THAT particular pairing! Yusuke already has Keiko and he's loyal, so I just can't see him getting a second lover. Ranma was born a dude, regardless of having a cursed female body 1/2 the time! And besides, if you're looking for optional pairings for him, you could've just given him to one of his three potential suitors (Shampoo, Ukyo, Kodachi).
I know my ranting will have zero effect on the overall storyline, especially considering how far you've likely gotten in it, but I just have to voice it!
But the debate of the pairings aside, I have to admit that this story is well written and you've done a good job of capturing Yusuke and the circumstances he's in right now. If you can maintain this level of quality, I MAY be able to partially overlook the fact that you're pairing Yusuke with a dude (but don't hold your breath for that).
Let's see where this goes.
Please, please, PLEASE tell me that pairing hint at the top of the page is a mistake or something! While I have no problem with most of them, Ranma-chan/Yusuke is just DISGUSTING! What's the big deal about gender-bender romances like this? Ugh! I hope (BEG!) that you change your mind on THAT particular pairing! Yusuke already has Keiko and he's loyal, so I just can't see him getting a second lover. Ranma was born a dude, regardless of having a cursed female body 1/2 the time! And besides, if you're looking for optional pairings for him, you could've just given him to one of his three potential suitors (Shampoo, Ukyo, Kodachi).
I know my ranting will have zero effect on the overall storyline, especially considering how far you've likely gotten in it, but I just have to voice it!
But the debate of the pairings aside, I have to admit that this story is well written and you've done a good job of capturing Yusuke and the circumstances he's in right now. If you can maintain this level of quality, I MAY be able to partially overlook the fact that you're pairing Yusuke with a dude (but don't hold your breath for that).
Let's see where this goes.
11/11/2015 c14 Winter's Folly
What you were saying when reiki is dull and you can think, isn't Ranma able to come with plans on the fly? And Yusuke isn't a wolf demon, I don't think. Random corrections~
What you were saying when reiki is dull and you can think, isn't Ranma able to come with plans on the fly? And Yusuke isn't a wolf demon, I don't think. Random corrections~
7/21/2015 c17 ryoryuran
Never expected this crossover to work. You have really surprised me. I really hope you keep this up. I'm not really bothered with the liberties you've taken with the characters. Others have already covered the differences between manga and anime, and you certainly went into detail in your profile from what I skimmed of it. It's fanfiction, ain't no serious thing.
Seriously, please follow up on this story. Please.
Never expected this crossover to work. You have really surprised me. I really hope you keep this up. I'm not really bothered with the liberties you've taken with the characters. Others have already covered the differences between manga and anime, and you certainly went into detail in your profile from what I skimmed of it. It's fanfiction, ain't no serious thing.
Seriously, please follow up on this story. Please.
7/7/2015 c1 Peter Kim
Akane is an asshole that deserves to be bashed to death!
Akane is an asshole that deserves to be bashed to death!
2/11/2015 c7 StrongAkane
You need to reread the manga and stop reading fanfiction before you start criticizing others of liking one person or another.
Akane a martial artist that barely trained what so ever and the only person from the main cast ,that can fight, she's debatable better than,if you look at the whole picture and don't use isolate incidents like Orochi, is Kuno.
She doesn't even have to look far to find better than her since so many of Ranma adversary are other schools heir/student in that same district who's able to give Ranma a serious hard time throughout the entire series would decimate her.
A ranma fans-I think you're mixing up the anime and the only taught Ranma a training method to increase his speed AND STRENGTH,the latter often forgotten, and didn't teach Ranma the speed boosting attack that he did against Ryoga later was his own invention and I believe it was nameless in the manga,with one exception later on.
I would argue that the manga never shown a single incident in their 'serious' one on one fight that makes me think Ryoga is stronger.
Most of those fights involve Ryoga have serious advantages or Ranma having serious disadvantage.
Breaking Point-The first fight involve Ranma fighting a Ryoga that can ignore every attack of his while also kill him with a single finger.(people often forgot Ranma is fighting under this assumption)
Tornado- Ranma is hit by Weakness Mox. that cause him to be vastly weakened to the point he can't hurt a child even while trying to hit as hard as possible.
Ki Blast -Ryoga learn a ki blast attack that is huge and he can rabid fire it with his hand faster than Ranma can is that the technique involve using depression from the most depression prone of the main cast.
*Ranma tend to limit himself by not using old techniques against Ryoga or other rivals most of the time*
Note that the above is only for the manga and that the anime Ryoga is much stronger than anime Ranma and at his best(learn anything goes in one day) debatable better than manga Ranma best.
You need to reread the manga and stop reading fanfiction before you start criticizing others of liking one person or another.
Akane a martial artist that barely trained what so ever and the only person from the main cast ,that can fight, she's debatable better than,if you look at the whole picture and don't use isolate incidents like Orochi, is Kuno.
She doesn't even have to look far to find better than her since so many of Ranma adversary are other schools heir/student in that same district who's able to give Ranma a serious hard time throughout the entire series would decimate her.
A ranma fans-I think you're mixing up the anime and the only taught Ranma a training method to increase his speed AND STRENGTH,the latter often forgotten, and didn't teach Ranma the speed boosting attack that he did against Ryoga later was his own invention and I believe it was nameless in the manga,with one exception later on.
I would argue that the manga never shown a single incident in their 'serious' one on one fight that makes me think Ryoga is stronger.
Most of those fights involve Ryoga have serious advantages or Ranma having serious disadvantage.
Breaking Point-The first fight involve Ranma fighting a Ryoga that can ignore every attack of his while also kill him with a single finger.(people often forgot Ranma is fighting under this assumption)
Tornado- Ranma is hit by Weakness Mox. that cause him to be vastly weakened to the point he can't hurt a child even while trying to hit as hard as possible.
Ki Blast -Ryoga learn a ki blast attack that is huge and he can rabid fire it with his hand faster than Ranma can is that the technique involve using depression from the most depression prone of the main cast.
*Ranma tend to limit himself by not using old techniques against Ryoga or other rivals most of the time*
Note that the above is only for the manga and that the anime Ryoga is much stronger than anime Ranma and at his best(learn anything goes in one day) debatable better than manga Ranma best.