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3/24 c3 BrainII
You shouldn't be allowed anywhere near a computer with how much you butchered the English language.
1/3/2018 c1 TechnoGalen
Actually, since it seems you've abandoned everything, do not come back and continue with this bastardized version of the English language.
7/7/2017 c3 Guest
did your ex girlfriend stomp on your heart mine did i hate the bitch
6/17/2014 c1 2DarkflowerOfJc
My EYES...

This is soposed to be REdone you know.

Where the grammer?

And please Captilices the names

Now I have a Exuces for bad spelling i'm a 5th going on 6th grader that got a 1 on spelling the hole year!

GET A BETA!

DarkFlowerOfTc Out
6/13/2014 c2 mike 10
keep writing this story is getting really good
3/3/2014 c2 20redlox2
Is the powder a method to stop The "10-tails" from sapping all there chakra?
2/3/2014 c1 10Gaea's Scion
Dude seriously, this needs to be redone one more time with a BETA if you dont have one. It was executed poorly and no I do not mean this as an insult or a flame.
2/2/2014 c2 15Leaf Ranger
Hmmm, interesting. Very interesting. So Naruto controls darkness, and has a wolf summons?

Not bad.
1/29/2014 c1 Guest
Nice, but you could improve your Grammer and character dialouge.

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