for naruto from the darkness to the light RE DO3/24 c3 BrainII
You shouldn't be allowed anywhere near a computer with how much you butchered the English language.
You shouldn't be allowed anywhere near a computer with how much you butchered the English language.
1/3/2018 c1 TechnoGalen
Actually, since it seems you've abandoned everything, do not come back and continue with this bastardized version of the English language.
Actually, since it seems you've abandoned everything, do not come back and continue with this bastardized version of the English language.
7/7/2017 c3 Guest
did your ex girlfriend stomp on your heart mine did i hate the bitch
did your ex girlfriend stomp on your heart mine did i hate the bitch
6/17/2014 c1 
2DarkflowerOfJc
My EYES...
This is soposed to be REdone you know.
Where the grammer?
And please Captilices the names
Now I have a Exuces for bad spelling i'm a 5th going on 6th grader that got a 1 on spelling the hole year!
GET A BETA!
DarkFlowerOfTc Out
2DarkflowerOfJcMy EYES...
This is soposed to be REdone you know.
Where the grammer?
And please Captilices the names
Now I have a Exuces for bad spelling i'm a 5th going on 6th grader that got a 1 on spelling the hole year!
GET A BETA!
DarkFlowerOfTc Out
6/13/2014 c2 mike 10
keep writing this story is getting really good
keep writing this story is getting really good
2/3/2014 c1 10Gaea's Scion
Dude seriously, this needs to be redone one more time with a BETA if you dont have one. It was executed poorly and no I do not mean this as an insult or a flame.
10Gaea's ScionDude seriously, this needs to be redone one more time with a BETA if you dont have one. It was executed poorly and no I do not mean this as an insult or a flame.
2/2/2014 c2 15Leaf Ranger
Hmmm, interesting. Very interesting. So Naruto controls darkness, and has a wolf summons?
Not bad.
15Leaf RangerHmmm, interesting. Very interesting. So Naruto controls darkness, and has a wolf summons?
Not bad.
1/29/2014 c1 Guest
Nice, but you could improve your Grammer and character dialouge.
Nice, but you could improve your Grammer and character dialouge.