
2/9/2022 c48
3RonaldM40196867
Self-destruct Nirvana? Sounds drastic, I love it!
Sherry does not shut up about love.
Now Natsu can be carried by Ben without getting motion sickness.
I bet Natsu misses being Cannonbolt.
Happy does not like Wildmutt.
So Wildmutt is immune to poisons and viruses.
Ultimate Wildmutt rules!
Thanks Insane-Mane for the art.
Happy February!

Self-destruct Nirvana? Sounds drastic, I love it!
Sherry does not shut up about love.
Now Natsu can be carried by Ben without getting motion sickness.
I bet Natsu misses being Cannonbolt.
Happy does not like Wildmutt.
So Wildmutt is immune to poisons and viruses.
Ultimate Wildmutt rules!
Thanks Insane-Mane for the art.
Happy February!
2/9/2022 c48 kival737101
i thought Pyrohelixdrago was taking over this Story why are you Updating it then?
i thought Pyrohelixdrago was taking over this Story why are you Updating it then?
1/30/2022 c3 Guest
When will the fanfic get new chapters?
When will the fanfic get new chapters?
1/29/2022 c1 Guest
You tiny Japanese bastard...Ben could have won all fairy tale character he never needed help
You tiny Japanese bastard...Ben could have won all fairy tale character he never needed help
1/29/2022 c3 Guest
Japanese wanted their to come top always..I wonder why they didn't come out top in war... they got nuke and refused to suurender...they are egoistic people who needed tobe taught some lesson...I'm from Saudi but I really hate Japanese..they are the most weakest and worst people ever
Japanese wanted their to come top always..I wonder why they didn't come out top in war... they got nuke and refused to suurender...they are egoistic people who needed tobe taught some lesson...I'm from Saudi but I really hate Japanese..they are the most weakest and worst people ever
1/28/2022 c6 dvhojrovdmp
Using Clockwork's time ability doesn't drain Ben' stamina, nor does the Omnitrix actually need to recharge, the wielder of the Omnitrix can stay transformed indefinitely if given access to Master Control
Using Clockwork's time ability doesn't drain Ben' stamina, nor does the Omnitrix actually need to recharge, the wielder of the Omnitrix can stay transformed indefinitely if given access to Master Control
1/22/2022 c47 Guest
Please give Lucy the silver gate key of Caelum the chisel
Please give Lucy the silver gate key of Caelum the chisel
1/24/2022 c1 Basket in a Nutcase
coming back to this like two years later feels like seeing an old friend again
coming back to this like two years later feels like seeing an old friend again
1/20/2022 c47
15Vanessa Masters
As Erza continued to run, she glanced down and ruminated further. Images of the young Jellal from her past made her heart cringe for some reason. Her head was warring against the two versions of Jellal that she knew: the evil one that hurt her tremendously, and the good one from all those years ago.
Erza narrowed her eyes in confusion. 'I wish I knew what I was supposed to be feeling right now.'
Her thoughts then shifted to the otherworldly hero. His cool, calm, and noble self. She had seen how brave and heroic he was for herself and also via his memories in his mind. His childish excitement around smoothies was adorable. The occasional quips he would make while fighting could get a little tiring, but she'd be lying if it didn't make her inwardly smile.
Titania knew in her heart how she felt about the shapeshifting hero. Their date was enough evidence to convince her. Yet conflicting feelings regarding the blue-haired boy from her past were resurfacing, and she wasn't sure what to think at the moment.
_
Kudos for all of this!
Very impressive.
And dang, erza torn a bit. She loves Ben, but now here's jellal
Oh, intense.
Geavatak takes care of evil natau, but pesky dust couldn't bust him out of nirvana thrall, but fortune smiles and lyon is alive.
Phew.
Here's hoping no evil Ben.
But these battle scenes, very well done.

As Erza continued to run, she glanced down and ruminated further. Images of the young Jellal from her past made her heart cringe for some reason. Her head was warring against the two versions of Jellal that she knew: the evil one that hurt her tremendously, and the good one from all those years ago.
Erza narrowed her eyes in confusion. 'I wish I knew what I was supposed to be feeling right now.'
Her thoughts then shifted to the otherworldly hero. His cool, calm, and noble self. She had seen how brave and heroic he was for herself and also via his memories in his mind. His childish excitement around smoothies was adorable. The occasional quips he would make while fighting could get a little tiring, but she'd be lying if it didn't make her inwardly smile.
Titania knew in her heart how she felt about the shapeshifting hero. Their date was enough evidence to convince her. Yet conflicting feelings regarding the blue-haired boy from her past were resurfacing, and she wasn't sure what to think at the moment.
_
Kudos for all of this!
Very impressive.
And dang, erza torn a bit. She loves Ben, but now here's jellal
Oh, intense.
Geavatak takes care of evil natau, but pesky dust couldn't bust him out of nirvana thrall, but fortune smiles and lyon is alive.
Phew.
Here's hoping no evil Ben.
But these battle scenes, very well done.
1/19/2022 c47
11Insane Dominator
Here we are again, with a new chapter to Ultimate Fairy. It’s been some time since this was updated, and I have to say that despite there being a sudden lackluster at the end of the chapter, it was still a surmisable read to get through. You did very well in making sure that while Lucy’s fight didn’t change too much, you made sure to shorthand it well. Not only that, but you went the extra mile when it came to Natsu’s emotional trauma and his ideologies against Ben, and how in the end, Ben realized that he was the one at fault here. You took the time to ensure that no matter, what, there was plenty of focus on Ben and Natsu’s case.
The chapter started off on the right food. It wasn’t a long scene, but you’ve had Erza endure a lot of psychological trauma against Jellal. It’s an interesting point to be made. Erza and Jellal was a thing in the canon, but at the same time, you mended Ben and her so well that the confliction is putting on a thin line. From how she admired Jellal, to ending up feeling resentful towards him, to how you were explaining the feelings she felt about what they went through. Overall, a fine showing with what was going through Erza’s mind at the moment.
Meanwhile, the group comprised of Gray, Happy, Lucy, Hibiki, Wendy, and Sherry was making progress towards the light. I feel sorry fir Hibiki being talked to badly throughout the chapter. In fact, the arc was giving him a hard time all around. I wouldn’t be surprised if there’s a twist in the end of all this where he tries to expose Ben in some way.
Nice callback to the Lyon scene from before, when Gray was trying to avoid the touchy subject of Ben’s life and origins.
It was ironic of Happy believing that Natsu wouldn’t be affected by Nirvana. If he saw what Natsu had done throughout the chapter, it wouldn’t sit well with anyone. Natsu was succumbing to Nirvana and aimed to hurt Ben, for treading on everything he stood for, and how he looked down on him. A lot of his pride was stamped out and he wanted retribution. You didn’t hold back when it came to Natsu’s emotions on the matter. You really highlighted his anger and grief because of Nirvana, and how Ben had to put up with the Revelation as such.
Their battle was written fairly well, with the aliens Ben used being good choices against Natsu. Using Goop was a neat start. He had a heat-resistant body, but even that wasn’t enough to stop Natsu in terms of power. So Ben got more versatile with Eye Guy. That was a unique choice, but all around a nice showing of said alien. But the big turnaround was how you had Ben use Gravattack and use gravity to make Natsu whirl around. Nice job in using his motion sickness against him!
It’s when Ben becomes Pesky Dust to pick at what bugged Natsu’s mind that he realized what the problem was. He was right in some ways of how NOBODY thought this through nor thought of a Plan B or C. It was very traumatic and Ben relived through all the emotions Natsu went through. You did a fine job showing his remorse in his actions, and how despite being a hero, he was a very bad friend.
But before anymore damage could be done, Natsu was able to break free when Lyon was found to be alive. A nice little callback to when Sherry snapped out of it when Lyon was revealed to still be alive when he stopped Racer.
The scene with Lucy’s battle against Angel was low-grade, just like you said. But in a way, it’s fine. Not too much had changed from the canon anyways, so it worked out. You didn’t have much of any alterations aside from the ending with the real Gray freezing Angel and Sherry using her dolls to halt Angel, allowing Lucy to deal the finishing blow. Again, this scene was more shorthanded, but with it so mended with canon, it didn’t affect too much of the outcome.
Finally, we have Erza confronting Jellal, who not only had blotched skin because of radiation, but also the Ethernano overload wiped his memory. The scene carried on in familiar with the canon, despite what happened in the beginning with conflicted feelings she felt earlier between Bena and Jellal.
So, overall, this chapter had a slightly lower quality in terms of writing consistency, but there was still plenty of depth to Ben and Natsu’s perspectives in their quarrel. You highlighted how much of an antagonist ben was in Natsu’s eyes, despite the latter being said foe. Lucy’s fight was kept to the point, but still well enough to tell the being subtle differences here and there.
Looking forward to seeing more soon!
~Insane Dominator

Here we are again, with a new chapter to Ultimate Fairy. It’s been some time since this was updated, and I have to say that despite there being a sudden lackluster at the end of the chapter, it was still a surmisable read to get through. You did very well in making sure that while Lucy’s fight didn’t change too much, you made sure to shorthand it well. Not only that, but you went the extra mile when it came to Natsu’s emotional trauma and his ideologies against Ben, and how in the end, Ben realized that he was the one at fault here. You took the time to ensure that no matter, what, there was plenty of focus on Ben and Natsu’s case.
The chapter started off on the right food. It wasn’t a long scene, but you’ve had Erza endure a lot of psychological trauma against Jellal. It’s an interesting point to be made. Erza and Jellal was a thing in the canon, but at the same time, you mended Ben and her so well that the confliction is putting on a thin line. From how she admired Jellal, to ending up feeling resentful towards him, to how you were explaining the feelings she felt about what they went through. Overall, a fine showing with what was going through Erza’s mind at the moment.
Meanwhile, the group comprised of Gray, Happy, Lucy, Hibiki, Wendy, and Sherry was making progress towards the light. I feel sorry fir Hibiki being talked to badly throughout the chapter. In fact, the arc was giving him a hard time all around. I wouldn’t be surprised if there’s a twist in the end of all this where he tries to expose Ben in some way.
Nice callback to the Lyon scene from before, when Gray was trying to avoid the touchy subject of Ben’s life and origins.
It was ironic of Happy believing that Natsu wouldn’t be affected by Nirvana. If he saw what Natsu had done throughout the chapter, it wouldn’t sit well with anyone. Natsu was succumbing to Nirvana and aimed to hurt Ben, for treading on everything he stood for, and how he looked down on him. A lot of his pride was stamped out and he wanted retribution. You didn’t hold back when it came to Natsu’s emotions on the matter. You really highlighted his anger and grief because of Nirvana, and how Ben had to put up with the Revelation as such.
Their battle was written fairly well, with the aliens Ben used being good choices against Natsu. Using Goop was a neat start. He had a heat-resistant body, but even that wasn’t enough to stop Natsu in terms of power. So Ben got more versatile with Eye Guy. That was a unique choice, but all around a nice showing of said alien. But the big turnaround was how you had Ben use Gravattack and use gravity to make Natsu whirl around. Nice job in using his motion sickness against him!
It’s when Ben becomes Pesky Dust to pick at what bugged Natsu’s mind that he realized what the problem was. He was right in some ways of how NOBODY thought this through nor thought of a Plan B or C. It was very traumatic and Ben relived through all the emotions Natsu went through. You did a fine job showing his remorse in his actions, and how despite being a hero, he was a very bad friend.
But before anymore damage could be done, Natsu was able to break free when Lyon was found to be alive. A nice little callback to when Sherry snapped out of it when Lyon was revealed to still be alive when he stopped Racer.
The scene with Lucy’s battle against Angel was low-grade, just like you said. But in a way, it’s fine. Not too much had changed from the canon anyways, so it worked out. You didn’t have much of any alterations aside from the ending with the real Gray freezing Angel and Sherry using her dolls to halt Angel, allowing Lucy to deal the finishing blow. Again, this scene was more shorthanded, but with it so mended with canon, it didn’t affect too much of the outcome.
Finally, we have Erza confronting Jellal, who not only had blotched skin because of radiation, but also the Ethernano overload wiped his memory. The scene carried on in familiar with the canon, despite what happened in the beginning with conflicted feelings she felt earlier between Bena and Jellal.
So, overall, this chapter had a slightly lower quality in terms of writing consistency, but there was still plenty of depth to Ben and Natsu’s perspectives in their quarrel. You highlighted how much of an antagonist ben was in Natsu’s eyes, despite the latter being said foe. Lucy’s fight was kept to the point, but still well enough to tell the being subtle differences here and there.
Looking forward to seeing more soon!
~Insane Dominator
1/16/2022 c46 Guest
I saw in the bio that chapter 47 and beyond will be taken over by pyrohelixdrago, so it makes sense that maybe he would update chapters 1 to 45 or 46
I saw in the bio that chapter 47 and beyond will be taken over by pyrohelixdrago, so it makes sense that maybe he would update chapters 1 to 45 or 46
1/18/2022 c47
8dndkeg
It's nice to know that the story on your end will finish up at the Oracion Seis arc. I always hated that when stories would end abruptly, they wouldn't at least finish to a good stopping point to give some sense of closure. I hope that once this story is fully passed onto the next author, they will keep the flame alive as you have done these past few years (I have high hopes).
Anyways, I have nothing else to say here so stay safe and stay cool!

It's nice to know that the story on your end will finish up at the Oracion Seis arc. I always hated that when stories would end abruptly, they wouldn't at least finish to a good stopping point to give some sense of closure. I hope that once this story is fully passed onto the next author, they will keep the flame alive as you have done these past few years (I have high hopes).
Anyways, I have nothing else to say here so stay safe and stay cool!
1/16/2022 c7 Chris Chronos
Wow, this story has been here about one-third of my life. Old and gold, and the work is awesome. In fact I've been wandering around the website and read several fan fictions, and this one stands out. I am glad this gold old thing is still ongoing. Looking forward to the next chapters, though I've only read 7 of them.
Wow, this story has been here about one-third of my life. Old and gold, and the work is awesome. In fact I've been wandering around the website and read several fan fictions, and this one stands out. I am glad this gold old thing is still ongoing. Looking forward to the next chapters, though I've only read 7 of them.