for Ultimate Fairy: Volume I11/29/2021 c46 Joshua kiesow
I can’t wait for the next bunch of chapters
To come out
I can’t wait for the next bunch of chapters
To come out
11/24/2021 c38 TilToday
I think you should let him beat up powerful foes alone qnd faster a bit more... During the battle with laxus ben didn't really do much and when he was using feedback why didn't he discharge some of that energy on laxus instead of acting like a meatshield
Also alien x has to show up soon man ... I hope atheist against acnologia
I think you should let him beat up powerful foes alone qnd faster a bit more... During the battle with laxus ben didn't really do much and when he was using feedback why didn't he discharge some of that energy on laxus instead of acting like a meatshield
Also alien x has to show up soon man ... I hope atheist against acnologia
11/20/2021 c46 Guest
Don't change a thing your doing great I say this cause a lot of people are asking you to make some pretty big changes like skipping fights but honestly that would probably hurt the story more than anything else but I will let you make your own decisions on the story although I will say as a suggestion is have something happen between ben and erza so that it's an accurate portrayal of a relationship but of course dosen't have to end but it would be nice for a trial of there love and all thanks keep doing what your doing I love the story your honestly the best writer that I've seen on this type of fanfiction
Don't change a thing your doing great I say this cause a lot of people are asking you to make some pretty big changes like skipping fights but honestly that would probably hurt the story more than anything else but I will let you make your own decisions on the story although I will say as a suggestion is have something happen between ben and erza so that it's an accurate portrayal of a relationship but of course dosen't have to end but it would be nice for a trial of there love and all thanks keep doing what your doing I love the story your honestly the best writer that I've seen on this type of fanfiction
11/20/2021 c46 Guest
This is amazing I completely love what your doing with the story perfectly balanced with both sides of fairy tail and ben 10 no one is under scaled or over scaled in power or how their character would react best fanfiction I've seen
This is amazing I completely love what your doing with the story perfectly balanced with both sides of fairy tail and ben 10 no one is under scaled or over scaled in power or how their character would react best fanfiction I've seen
11/18/2021 c12 Guest
I wish ya would skip the non ben Fight scene parts unless its part To move the plot along
or atleast skip to the end to the time where the winner said how they won lol
I wish ya would skip the non ben Fight scene parts unless its part To move the plot along
or atleast skip to the end to the time where the winner said how they won lol
11/18/2021 c8 Guest
I really hope ben uses gray mater to make some magic tools like a bubble shield or something cuz my guy is like a normal guy in a sea of captain americas or super boys
Yeah his enemies were a bit durable too but wizards are like mini superboys
I really hope ben uses gray mater to make some magic tools like a bubble shield or something cuz my guy is like a normal guy in a sea of captain americas or super boys
Yeah his enemies were a bit durable too but wizards are like mini superboys
11/17/2021 c3 Guest
I was hopping he would be faster in transforming lol
Like having a primed alien for any situation like big chill since he can ghost things and fly
Or swamp fire cuz he can heal
I was hopping he would be faster in transforming lol
Like having a primed alien for any situation like big chill since he can ghost things and fly
Or swamp fire cuz he can heal
11/17/2021 c1 Guest
I know he aint a human of earthland but the guy has some erudite DNA in him or whatever so maybe he might have some lick with simple magic like requip magic or maybe some barrier magic or stealth magic or sensing magic so ben could have something outside of aliens to fall back on
I know he aint a human of earthland but the guy has some erudite DNA in him or whatever so maybe he might have some lick with simple magic like requip magic or maybe some barrier magic or stealth magic or sensing magic so ben could have something outside of aliens to fall back on
11/16/2021 c37 
9DarkerEvening
NOW WOW! Ben Ten, Natsu, and Gajeel! An all-out combo against the Lightning Laxus!
This really almost put Laxus's sanity near the deep end! Seriously, he has many moments of realizing of what he was doing and deep doesn't want to hurt his friends, but he really is letting his rage take over! He is all out to kill Ben! And Freed his best friend is witnessing this, all the while he and Levy are pleading with him...
NRG's final form was awesome than I'd expect and really has pissed Laxus off! Unfortunately, Ben's power run down. And crazy how Laxus was ready to kill Ben in his human form... if it weren't for Gajeel saving him!
And the best of all... NRG's last trick, giving Natsu a ball of flame of alien power. Unlike any fire Natsu has ever had... and it exceeded all expectations.
He doesn't know it yet... but Ben Tennyson helped Natsu Dragneel awaken a Secret Dragon Slayer art this soon! And with it... fittingly used to finally beat the leader of the Thunder Legion!
This chapter made the combo shine!
Now what's next!
9DarkerEveningNOW WOW! Ben Ten, Natsu, and Gajeel! An all-out combo against the Lightning Laxus!
This really almost put Laxus's sanity near the deep end! Seriously, he has many moments of realizing of what he was doing and deep doesn't want to hurt his friends, but he really is letting his rage take over! He is all out to kill Ben! And Freed his best friend is witnessing this, all the while he and Levy are pleading with him...
NRG's final form was awesome than I'd expect and really has pissed Laxus off! Unfortunately, Ben's power run down. And crazy how Laxus was ready to kill Ben in his human form... if it weren't for Gajeel saving him!
And the best of all... NRG's last trick, giving Natsu a ball of flame of alien power. Unlike any fire Natsu has ever had... and it exceeded all expectations.
He doesn't know it yet... but Ben Tennyson helped Natsu Dragneel awaken a Secret Dragon Slayer art this soon! And with it... fittingly used to finally beat the leader of the Thunder Legion!
This chapter made the combo shine!
Now what's next!
11/16/2021 c36 DarkerEvening
Yes, the final confrontation... Natsu Dragneel and Ben Tennyson vs Laxus Dreyar! This a battle I've been waiting for since the start!
Agree that Lucy and Loke would have grown since the Entrapment, and it helped in their fight against Bixlow!
That part of Mystogen was better! And what Mystogen told Ben about sharing similar circumstances... foreshadowing!
Now the climax is coming! I appreciate so much the time it took for you to update this and understand. I'm still loving this!
Yes, the final confrontation... Natsu Dragneel and Ben Tennyson vs Laxus Dreyar! This a battle I've been waiting for since the start!
Agree that Lucy and Loke would have grown since the Entrapment, and it helped in their fight against Bixlow!
That part of Mystogen was better! And what Mystogen told Ben about sharing similar circumstances... foreshadowing!
Now the climax is coming! I appreciate so much the time it took for you to update this and understand. I'm still loving this!
11/16/2021 c35 DarkerEvening
Awesome change with Ben vs Evergreen!
Thanks to Ben as the winner the girls are free!
Laxus is now bugged one his Thunder Legion was defeated by Ben... he has no idea what Ben is capable of!
Funny how Natsu was scared of cracking Erza, and feared what wrath Ben would have had in store for him!
Now Laxus is bringing the stakes up on everyone in Magnolia! The fight continues!
Awesome change with Ben vs Evergreen!
Thanks to Ben as the winner the girls are free!
Laxus is now bugged one his Thunder Legion was defeated by Ben... he has no idea what Ben is capable of!
Funny how Natsu was scared of cracking Erza, and feared what wrath Ben would have had in store for him!
Now Laxus is bringing the stakes up on everyone in Magnolia! The fight continues!
11/16/2021 c34 DarkerEvening
The Battle Royale of Fairy Tail has begun!
Lovely for the chapter to start with Ben and Erza confirming their relationship to the guild, and everyone's reactions! And Makarov's!
Laxus has gone far for Ben to take, at least Ben found a way to beat Alzack, Jet, and Droy without beating them to a pulp! Ben could totally tell how Alzack was feeling. Oh, it is on... it will be soon when Ben wipes the floor with Laxus!
The Battle Royale of Fairy Tail has begun!
Lovely for the chapter to start with Ben and Erza confirming their relationship to the guild, and everyone's reactions! And Makarov's!
Laxus has gone far for Ben to take, at least Ben found a way to beat Alzack, Jet, and Droy without beating them to a pulp! Ben could totally tell how Alzack was feeling. Oh, it is on... it will be soon when Ben wipes the floor with Laxus!
11/15/2021 c33 DarkerEvening
LOVE THIS! Finally we get the date we waited so long for!
You realize with all her toughness, Erza is innocent when it comes to dates! This is her first date! She almost treats like a quest!
Fun Cana, Mira, Juvia help both of them get ready!
So LOL! When Ben and Erza go to the play it's play Fairy Tail puts on... instead it's with Elfman as the Prince! LOL! A real man! And Erza can't resist getting on stage! Ooh, I wish we get to read the rest of the play! That was one of the most funniest moment in the canon!
Next scene, we get another warm scene... Ben gives Erza her first picnic! And she is so love dovey, and Ben brought strawberry! So CUTE and Warm as Ben and Erza look out the nice view of Magnolia! And that moment, though Ben will still mourn Julie... he will still have room in his heart to love Erza... and the Fairy Queen responds with a passionate kiss!
And crazy, watching them is Paradox! And he seems happy Ben has found happiness! Hope he tells Gwen and Kevin that Ben is doing good!
So happy that Erza has broke out of her shell and felt the most happy she has ever felt!
After things go so lovely... the next morning... we Laxus being the arrogant jerk he is and beats Gajeel and almost hurts Levy. Ben now has the feeling it won't be the last... and Laxus is ready to plan his move...
The Harvest Festival is up next! Thank you so much for the date we all deserve! The first of many we hope! I'm all fired up now!
LOVE THIS! Finally we get the date we waited so long for!
You realize with all her toughness, Erza is innocent when it comes to dates! This is her first date! She almost treats like a quest!
Fun Cana, Mira, Juvia help both of them get ready!
So LOL! When Ben and Erza go to the play it's play Fairy Tail puts on... instead it's with Elfman as the Prince! LOL! A real man! And Erza can't resist getting on stage! Ooh, I wish we get to read the rest of the play! That was one of the most funniest moment in the canon!
Next scene, we get another warm scene... Ben gives Erza her first picnic! And she is so love dovey, and Ben brought strawberry! So CUTE and Warm as Ben and Erza look out the nice view of Magnolia! And that moment, though Ben will still mourn Julie... he will still have room in his heart to love Erza... and the Fairy Queen responds with a passionate kiss!
And crazy, watching them is Paradox! And he seems happy Ben has found happiness! Hope he tells Gwen and Kevin that Ben is doing good!
So happy that Erza has broke out of her shell and felt the most happy she has ever felt!
After things go so lovely... the next morning... we Laxus being the arrogant jerk he is and beats Gajeel and almost hurts Levy. Ben now has the feeling it won't be the last... and Laxus is ready to plan his move...
The Harvest Festival is up next! Thank you so much for the date we all deserve! The first of many we hope! I'm all fired up now!
11/15/2021 c32 DarkerEvening
Finally I has happened!
And it is official!
Ben x Erza!
A lot chapters of words to get to this point! I must congratulate you and those who had supported you in putting the time and effort in making this Entrapment Arc! A heck of a ride for the Ultimate Team in a race against time to save Ben 10! Full of dangers, trauma, action, emotion, and... love! And this was the best action to finally have Erza and Ben to open and confess their feelings for each other! I so so look forward to it for the next arc!
I'm all fired up now! Next stop... the first date between the Bearer of the Omnitrix and Titania, the Queen of Fairies!
Finally I has happened!
And it is official!
Ben x Erza!
A lot chapters of words to get to this point! I must congratulate you and those who had supported you in putting the time and effort in making this Entrapment Arc! A heck of a ride for the Ultimate Team in a race against time to save Ben 10! Full of dangers, trauma, action, emotion, and... love! And this was the best action to finally have Erza and Ben to open and confess their feelings for each other! I so so look forward to it for the next arc!
I'm all fired up now! Next stop... the first date between the Bearer of the Omnitrix and Titania, the Queen of Fairies!
11/15/2021 c31 DarkerEvening
Now this was BIG, AWESOME, EMOTIONAL, and WHOO!
So awesome your customized intro of Ultimate Fairy and good song!
Vilgax here proved to be Ben 10's deadliest nemesis and no doubt most evil of the rogue gallery!
What he just did...
So crying... for Julie... and Ship...
And Vilgax just laughs it off...
That was how it started... and no doubt Ben's rage was unchained like never before!
And Erza witnesses it all! So much like the tower of heaven and with Simon's sacrifice.
It is what helps to finally get to Ben... and finally do the thing!
Ben Tennyson and Erza Scarlet... both conscious... their (second) kiss!
Gives Ben what he needs to finally destroy the Entrapment and Ereggor!
And back to the real world... just when it looks like all was loss... Ben wakes up!
So beautiful and emotional the ending you customize! So nostalgic and happy about Ben's journey reminiscing his old family... and the new family he has found in Fairy Tail and with Erza! Love the song! I'm fired up to see the Aftermath!
Now this was BIG, AWESOME, EMOTIONAL, and WHOO!
So awesome your customized intro of Ultimate Fairy and good song!
Vilgax here proved to be Ben 10's deadliest nemesis and no doubt most evil of the rogue gallery!
What he just did...
So crying... for Julie... and Ship...
And Vilgax just laughs it off...
That was how it started... and no doubt Ben's rage was unchained like never before!
And Erza witnesses it all! So much like the tower of heaven and with Simon's sacrifice.
It is what helps to finally get to Ben... and finally do the thing!
Ben Tennyson and Erza Scarlet... both conscious... their (second) kiss!
Gives Ben what he needs to finally destroy the Entrapment and Ereggor!
And back to the real world... just when it looks like all was loss... Ben wakes up!
So beautiful and emotional the ending you customize! So nostalgic and happy about Ben's journey reminiscing his old family... and the new family he has found in Fairy Tail and with Erza! Love the song! I'm fired up to see the Aftermath!