
5/20/2024 c1 Bemidin
Well, at least I can come back here and remeber this story WAS good under Ultimate10.
Well, at least I can come back here and remeber this story WAS good under Ultimate10.
4/23/2024 c1
3RHatch89
I'm so sad that you chose to adopt this out, because no offense, but PyroHelixDrago is just not doing it justice. His plot beats seem to be all over the place, and it is clear that he only has rudimentary skills in writing and grammar. It's to the point where the characters are so OOC that they are almost caricatures of themselves. He also completely backtracked on character development to the point where the Fairy Tail cast are basically secondary-background characters in comparison to Ben 10 and Generator Rex characters.

I'm so sad that you chose to adopt this out, because no offense, but PyroHelixDrago is just not doing it justice. His plot beats seem to be all over the place, and it is clear that he only has rudimentary skills in writing and grammar. It's to the point where the characters are so OOC that they are almost caricatures of themselves. He also completely backtracked on character development to the point where the Fairy Tail cast are basically secondary-background characters in comparison to Ben 10 and Generator Rex characters.
12/31/2023 c50 GutsSparda
Loved the story, character, writing, just the whole thing really, and I was excited to see more of it, especially the time skip and tournament with Ben involved, sadly I had to drop the story after this volume. The new author just isn't writing the same of anything, it's all different and in a very bad way, I read a few chapters and tried to power on, and that was the problem, with this volume I even stayed up late to read more, with volume 2 I had to force myself and take breaks, it took me an entire day just to read two chapters from how many breaks I had to take. Not sure if you'll pick up where you left off or take back the story, but this was a great story nonetheless and its quite bad that it's changed for the worse, and many reviews of volume 2 prove that to me.
Loved the story, character, writing, just the whole thing really, and I was excited to see more of it, especially the time skip and tournament with Ben involved, sadly I had to drop the story after this volume. The new author just isn't writing the same of anything, it's all different and in a very bad way, I read a few chapters and tried to power on, and that was the problem, with this volume I even stayed up late to read more, with volume 2 I had to force myself and take breaks, it took me an entire day just to read two chapters from how many breaks I had to take. Not sure if you'll pick up where you left off or take back the story, but this was a great story nonetheless and its quite bad that it's changed for the worse, and many reviews of volume 2 prove that to me.
11/28/2023 c41 Guest
There were many alien ben could use to deafet those worm like upgrade ghost freak gravttack but the story ir nice
There were many alien ben could use to deafet those worm like upgrade ghost freak gravttack but the story ir nice
11/16/2023 c50 Mechafreack95
Hey ult.10, don't know if you're gonna read this, but pyrohelixdrago is taking away the essence and integrity of the fanfic, i know you pass the project to him, but the formula he is using isn't compatible with the fanfic, i am concient that there isn't much that you can do, do to the fact that you aren't in the project's wheel anymore, but i belive that as the one who pass it, it is in the best interest of the fanfic that its stay loyal to the essence and integrity, just talk to him please, for the sake of this fanfic that many like to read
Hey ult.10, don't know if you're gonna read this, but pyrohelixdrago is taking away the essence and integrity of the fanfic, i know you pass the project to him, but the formula he is using isn't compatible with the fanfic, i am concient that there isn't much that you can do, do to the fact that you aren't in the project's wheel anymore, but i belive that as the one who pass it, it is in the best interest of the fanfic that its stay loyal to the essence and integrity, just talk to him please, for the sake of this fanfic that many like to read
9/13/2023 c50 Guest
Somebody already made a rewrite of this author pyrohelixdrago Title is Ultimate Fairy Volume 2
Somebody already made a rewrite of this author pyrohelixdrago Title is Ultimate Fairy Volume 2
9/13/2023 c30 Guest
Aggregor would actually lose to Alien X.
Aggregor would actually lose to Alien X.
9/13/2023 c22 Guest
Honestly Simon could have lived. Omnitrix has a feature that saves one from dying.
Honestly Simon could have lived. Omnitrix has a feature that saves one from dying.