for Ultimate Fairy: Volume I3/30/2023 c2 
3Amit Barabi
Why would Big Chill not work? Natsu can't harm him, and being too cold should probably do something.
3Amit BarabiWhy would Big Chill not work? Natsu can't harm him, and being too cold should probably do something.
3/21/2023 c48 3ReaderWarrior
Oof, don't remind me of Carla and Wendy's guild. I'm not ready for that.
No, Wendy plays with air. Natsu plays with fire :D
I can't wait for Wendy and Jellal's connection to be revealed. Or, more specifically, his doppleganger.
I don't remember much about Brain, but really like how he might have taught Jellal the E.S. Gives more stakes for Erza and Ben.
I get why not do Laserscale, but what about Stinkfly? Might even help with Natsu if the transformation can fly.
Ah, I guess the sun sinking is a good reason.
Natsu shouldn't feel guilty.
Did Lucy take Angel's keys yet? Great.
Strange how after a breakup I hate seeing Lyon and Sherry's back and forth.
How does something 'smell' dangerous?
Welp. Time for Way Big.
Wait, MASTER HEX?!
Does Erza not have an armor to fly? Like the one with wings! Seems useful right now.
Oh, the love triangle. Uh, oh. Don't often see the 'childhood friend' being a guy.
Was there ever an in-story reason for the sickness?
Hahahaha. Even with all the danger, it's still an anime. Love it.
Dragonslayer vs Dragonslayer: Coming soon!
Why is it that the poison guy could read minds again?
Both times Ben is a blue furry? That's ironic.
Ben's gonna kill snake-man.
Hopefully Ben can forgive someone who has no memory. Or, at least, stand him (at least until he hears that Erza still likes Jellal).
Smart. If he won't answer questions, make him want to ask them.
Smart of been to turn into an animalistic-alien. Its 'thoughts' will be too hectic for him to read.
Of course, every dragonslayer needs an animal sidekick.
Wait, are the quill things canon? It's cool if not, I just never knew.
And aren't Vulpimancers from the Null Void?
Kinda love the new Ultimate-Wildmutt look.
So Cobra can only 'eat' deadly poisons? Interesting...
Dumb move to bring up Erza my guy...
Wait, he 'hears' thoughts through super sonic hearing? How? What-?
The more sound, the less one hears. Smart. But, since Cobra HEARS thoughts, shouldn't an alien made up of sound be impervious?
Love seeing the omnitrix work like this. And even more so Ben deciding between helping a fight, or helping to heal.
I remember something about the snake girl joining the guild. Right?
Oh no! Not Cait Shelter. The lives lost will be... unmeasurable.
Nirvana means peace. Reminds me of the native tribe who had like 50 words for love and not a single one for war. At least, until Columbus showed up.
Is his name seriously Richard? That's so normal its hilarious.
They can hear the Wall of Sound?! Yikes.
Would be interesting if Happy turned Angry and Natsu had to fight him. But I like this too.
Awww. Thanks Igneel.
IT COMES FROM THE POWER OF FRIENDSHIP, BRANIAC! PREPARE TO DIE
C'mon Happy, it's time for you to carry someone else.
Wait, it's NRG energy?! Oh, crap. That's awesome. I hope the omnitrix changes Ben if the radiation levels rise too high.
Dark magic doesn't have anything against fire and good-old-fashioned radiation! USA USA USA
I hope that this area does get irradiated and see them get radiation burns. Dark, I know, but it would show some realism (and holds Natsu back from using it frequently). Also, healing would be done easily.
NUKE DRAGON'S ROOOOOOOOAAAAARRRRR!
3ReaderWarriorOof, don't remind me of Carla and Wendy's guild. I'm not ready for that.
No, Wendy plays with air. Natsu plays with fire :D
I can't wait for Wendy and Jellal's connection to be revealed. Or, more specifically, his doppleganger.
I don't remember much about Brain, but really like how he might have taught Jellal the E.S. Gives more stakes for Erza and Ben.
I get why not do Laserscale, but what about Stinkfly? Might even help with Natsu if the transformation can fly.
Ah, I guess the sun sinking is a good reason.
Natsu shouldn't feel guilty.
Did Lucy take Angel's keys yet? Great.
Strange how after a breakup I hate seeing Lyon and Sherry's back and forth.
How does something 'smell' dangerous?
Welp. Time for Way Big.
Wait, MASTER HEX?!
Does Erza not have an armor to fly? Like the one with wings! Seems useful right now.
Oh, the love triangle. Uh, oh. Don't often see the 'childhood friend' being a guy.
Was there ever an in-story reason for the sickness?
Hahahaha. Even with all the danger, it's still an anime. Love it.
Dragonslayer vs Dragonslayer: Coming soon!
Why is it that the poison guy could read minds again?
Both times Ben is a blue furry? That's ironic.
Ben's gonna kill snake-man.
Hopefully Ben can forgive someone who has no memory. Or, at least, stand him (at least until he hears that Erza still likes Jellal).
Smart. If he won't answer questions, make him want to ask them.
Smart of been to turn into an animalistic-alien. Its 'thoughts' will be too hectic for him to read.
Of course, every dragonslayer needs an animal sidekick.
Wait, are the quill things canon? It's cool if not, I just never knew.
And aren't Vulpimancers from the Null Void?
Kinda love the new Ultimate-Wildmutt look.
So Cobra can only 'eat' deadly poisons? Interesting...
Dumb move to bring up Erza my guy...
Wait, he 'hears' thoughts through super sonic hearing? How? What-?
The more sound, the less one hears. Smart. But, since Cobra HEARS thoughts, shouldn't an alien made up of sound be impervious?
Love seeing the omnitrix work like this. And even more so Ben deciding between helping a fight, or helping to heal.
I remember something about the snake girl joining the guild. Right?
Oh no! Not Cait Shelter. The lives lost will be... unmeasurable.
Nirvana means peace. Reminds me of the native tribe who had like 50 words for love and not a single one for war. At least, until Columbus showed up.
Is his name seriously Richard? That's so normal its hilarious.
They can hear the Wall of Sound?! Yikes.
Would be interesting if Happy turned Angry and Natsu had to fight him. But I like this too.
Awww. Thanks Igneel.
IT COMES FROM THE POWER OF FRIENDSHIP, BRANIAC! PREPARE TO DIE
C'mon Happy, it's time for you to carry someone else.
Wait, it's NRG energy?! Oh, crap. That's awesome. I hope the omnitrix changes Ben if the radiation levels rise too high.
Dark magic doesn't have anything against fire and good-old-fashioned radiation! USA USA USA
I hope that this area does get irradiated and see them get radiation burns. Dark, I know, but it would show some realism (and holds Natsu back from using it frequently). Also, healing would be done easily.
NUKE DRAGON'S ROOOOOOOOAAAAARRRRR!
3/21/2023 c47 ReaderWarrior
Let's get back into it!
Love how Erza decides who her 'enemy' is. Nice touch referencing the Entrapment (one of my favourite arcs in any story).
Oh, a dark Erza? I really don't want to think about that... Actually, I do. Let's have evil Ben and Erza taking over the world!
Love the 'evil' Natsu imagery. But I have to wonder if this reflection of him is what END is supposed to be.
I forgot that it's still Natsu. He has his memories of their time together. Have them been warped so he hates Ben or is it just that Natsu, a few moments ago, 'snapped'?
Ah yes, the anti-gravity disk and the confusion surrounding it. Love how the omnitrix will 'fix' a damaged one.
Use Pesky Dust to make Natsu think he's killed Ben. That might snap him out of it.
Ooh, not the gravity roller coaster. That's cruel and unusual.
Hey! I called it!
If he's inside Natsu... then is it possible for him to meet someone else in there?
So it is rewriting his memories. I guess it doesn't have to rewrite what Ben told him a few chapter ago.
Can the spell effect Ben in Natsu's mind? It'd be cool to see, but I feel like after the Entrapment, Ben shouldn't be able to get effected by such a thing (it'd be too similar).
About time Lyon got up there! I'd imagine that seeing him alive will revert Natsu back to normal.
Oh, yeah. Charmcaster's golems.
I can't help but laugh at the image if Sagittarius saluting with a horse head.
Poor Aries :(
Ok, so good people corrupted turn evil. How do bad people turn good then?
Ice Stripper 2.0 hahahahahahaha
Ben slapping Natsu here seems kind of dumb, as his anger at the dragonslayer kinda led to this whole accident. He could at last apologize.
I've always loved a heartfelt speech where a character realizes their love. It also works great on telling someone how they view them.
Another great chapter!
Let's get back into it!
Love how Erza decides who her 'enemy' is. Nice touch referencing the Entrapment (one of my favourite arcs in any story).
Oh, a dark Erza? I really don't want to think about that... Actually, I do. Let's have evil Ben and Erza taking over the world!
Love the 'evil' Natsu imagery. But I have to wonder if this reflection of him is what END is supposed to be.
I forgot that it's still Natsu. He has his memories of their time together. Have them been warped so he hates Ben or is it just that Natsu, a few moments ago, 'snapped'?
Ah yes, the anti-gravity disk and the confusion surrounding it. Love how the omnitrix will 'fix' a damaged one.
Use Pesky Dust to make Natsu think he's killed Ben. That might snap him out of it.
Ooh, not the gravity roller coaster. That's cruel and unusual.
Hey! I called it!
If he's inside Natsu... then is it possible for him to meet someone else in there?
So it is rewriting his memories. I guess it doesn't have to rewrite what Ben told him a few chapter ago.
Can the spell effect Ben in Natsu's mind? It'd be cool to see, but I feel like after the Entrapment, Ben shouldn't be able to get effected by such a thing (it'd be too similar).
About time Lyon got up there! I'd imagine that seeing him alive will revert Natsu back to normal.
Oh, yeah. Charmcaster's golems.
I can't help but laugh at the image if Sagittarius saluting with a horse head.
Poor Aries :(
Ok, so good people corrupted turn evil. How do bad people turn good then?
Ice Stripper 2.0 hahahahahahaha
Ben slapping Natsu here seems kind of dumb, as his anger at the dragonslayer kinda led to this whole accident. He could at last apologize.
I've always loved a heartfelt speech where a character realizes their love. It also works great on telling someone how they view them.
Another great chapter!
3/20/2023 c50 Chris HansenDatelineNBC
Your fanfic fucking sucks I hope you fucking get gang raped by a pack of niggers
Your fanfic fucking sucks I hope you fucking get gang raped by a pack of niggers
2/15/2023 c22 JensenDaniels32
Erza's vision here is dumb when Ben has Alien X. You should have altered it.
Erza's vision here is dumb when Ben has Alien X. You should have altered it.