for To the End2/14/2014 c1 
397Fire The Canon
It's officially a very hard to decision to choose my favourite now. Dammit.
This one was fantastic too. You probably don't know (some people do) but parent/child fics are the way to my heart. If you wanna win me over, write a parent/child fic and I am forever yours.
Yep.
This was too beautiful. Gah. So sweet. I liked the little flashbacks and the letter-style, too. Man, that was sweet.
The only thing I will say about it is in places I felt maybe Molly used word choices that were a little too /young/ for her if that makes sense. Just be careful about that.
Other than that, this was flawless.
Well done.
397Fire The CanonIt's officially a very hard to decision to choose my favourite now. Dammit.
This one was fantastic too. You probably don't know (some people do) but parent/child fics are the way to my heart. If you wanna win me over, write a parent/child fic and I am forever yours.
Yep.
This was too beautiful. Gah. So sweet. I liked the little flashbacks and the letter-style, too. Man, that was sweet.
The only thing I will say about it is in places I felt maybe Molly used word choices that were a little too /young/ for her if that makes sense. Just be careful about that.
Other than that, this was flawless.
Well done.
2/9/2014 c1 Safari
HEEEEYYYY BBY GUESS WHAT. YOU'RE PERFECTION, LOVE.
All right, so I typically do not go out of my way to read Molly's character but you made her enjoyable to read. In this fandom, everyone makes her all motherly and bossy but you have given her flaws and sarcasm and made her relate-able SO A ROUND OF APPLAUSE TO YOU (:
I like the way you organised this with the prologue and epilogue in present tense and the Roman numerals in past tense. The sectioning off really helped the story flow.
Hahaha this was nice to see Molly's perspective on her twin troublemakers. Perhaps you could have added an anecdote comparing them to Fabian and Gideon since they were twins and her brothers too? Idk, that actually might take away from the story line. Just thought it would help parallel some similarities.
Nicely written, bby. Your formatting changes with each story you publish but your voice stays the same.
Love you to the moon and back, you wonderful grouping of atoms and molecules :3
xoxo wouldtheywriteasongforyou
HEEEEYYYY BBY GUESS WHAT. YOU'RE PERFECTION, LOVE.
All right, so I typically do not go out of my way to read Molly's character but you made her enjoyable to read. In this fandom, everyone makes her all motherly and bossy but you have given her flaws and sarcasm and made her relate-able SO A ROUND OF APPLAUSE TO YOU (:
I like the way you organised this with the prologue and epilogue in present tense and the Roman numerals in past tense. The sectioning off really helped the story flow.
Hahaha this was nice to see Molly's perspective on her twin troublemakers. Perhaps you could have added an anecdote comparing them to Fabian and Gideon since they were twins and her brothers too? Idk, that actually might take away from the story line. Just thought it would help parallel some similarities.
Nicely written, bby. Your formatting changes with each story you publish but your voice stays the same.
Love you to the moon and back, you wonderful grouping of atoms and molecules :3
xoxo wouldtheywriteasongforyou
2/2/2014 c1 2217 Hope
This was brilliant. It was so sad and funny at the same time. I loved all the different things and the one about the birthday cake and sneaking onto the train were just perfect. All the things in here were just so Fred and George like. I loved how you did it from Molly's perspective, it made it more powerful and you caught her voice wonderfully.
2217 HopeThis was brilliant. It was so sad and funny at the same time. I loved all the different things and the one about the birthday cake and sneaking onto the train were just perfect. All the things in here were just so Fred and George like. I loved how you did it from Molly's perspective, it made it more powerful and you caught her voice wonderfully.
2/2/2014 c1 111DobbyRocksSocks
I absolutely adore this. It's so sweet, and well written and just... Each section is perfect, though I loved the one about their first birthday party the most. It's just so Fred and George. The way you wrote it from Molly's POV was absolutely stunning. I don't think it would have been as effective from any other. This is one of my favourite twin fics, and I've read a fair few.
I really loved it.
111DobbyRocksSocksI absolutely adore this. It's so sweet, and well written and just... Each section is perfect, though I loved the one about their first birthday party the most. It's just so Fred and George. The way you wrote it from Molly's POV was absolutely stunning. I don't think it would have been as effective from any other. This is one of my favourite twin fics, and I've read a fair few.
I really loved it.
1/30/2014 c1 void420
This was beautiful and creative. I enjoy when writers use a unique style of narrative to tell their story. I can imagine Molly sitting beside a framed picture of him in the late evening when everyone's off to bed.
I'm sure people will have things to say about the frequent use of parenthesis. It is not a preferred style in most writing because it can break the flow of the narrative when seen over and over but I liked it. It fit. This was meant to be pretty free-form. Molly's character is used to explaining herself.
Overall, this was well done. Maybe a few sentences could be tightened here and there for a sleeker look (if that makes any sense, I'm sorry, maybe PM me if you have questions). I love the Weasleys and this is just another reason why.
This was beautiful and creative. I enjoy when writers use a unique style of narrative to tell their story. I can imagine Molly sitting beside a framed picture of him in the late evening when everyone's off to bed.
I'm sure people will have things to say about the frequent use of parenthesis. It is not a preferred style in most writing because it can break the flow of the narrative when seen over and over but I liked it. It fit. This was meant to be pretty free-form. Molly's character is used to explaining herself.
Overall, this was well done. Maybe a few sentences could be tightened here and there for a sleeker look (if that makes any sense, I'm sorry, maybe PM me if you have questions). I love the Weasleys and this is just another reason why.