for What if Remus was smarter than Canon12/12/2022 c1 
10kgfinkel
WTF is this garbage? Did you never pay attention in English class? There are so many spelling and grammatical errors that it looks like it was written by a 5 year old.
Start over. Do better.
10kgfinkelWTF is this garbage? Did you never pay attention in English class? There are so many spelling and grammatical errors that it looks like it was written by a 5 year old.
Start over. Do better.
9/1/2018 c1 1Arys Nightshade
Nice idea but the execution could use some work. There are numerous grammar and spelling issues, as well as a pace that makes things confusing for the reader.
1Arys NightshadeNice idea but the execution could use some work. There are numerous grammar and spelling issues, as well as a pace that makes things confusing for the reader.
9/14/2017 c5 SomeGuyFawkes
Whelp, despite a promising start, this fic has now devolved into clichéd and idiotic boilerplate.
Whelp, despite a promising start, this fic has now devolved into clichéd and idiotic boilerplate.
9/14/2017 c1 SomeGuyFawkes
Much better plot than canon, but a crapton of typos and ridiculous, unnecessary, Ron bashing hurt it a lot. (Hint: you can get someone to proof it and then edit the version here to fix at least the typos.)
Much better plot than canon, but a crapton of typos and ridiculous, unnecessary, Ron bashing hurt it a lot. (Hint: you can get someone to proof it and then edit the version here to fix at least the typos.)
7/31/2017 c2 34Acacia Jules
I'm sorry, Sirius just spent 12 years being driven INSANE, and you're trying to HOOK HIM UP?!
34Acacia JulesI'm sorry, Sirius just spent 12 years being driven INSANE, and you're trying to HOOK HIM UP?!
7/8/2017 c8 WhiteElfElder
Harry should have challenged Ron for his accusations and slander like that...maybe losing and being made a slave would stop his bs.
Harry should have challenged Ron for his accusations and slander like that...maybe losing and being made a slave would stop his bs.
4/1/2017 c1 4Padfoot'smyMan
It must be true love if Amelia Bones snogged him with those disgusting moldy teeth.
4Padfoot'smyManIt must be true love if Amelia Bones snogged him with those disgusting moldy teeth.
2/27/2017 c1 Guest
First time in a looooonng time I've read a well made scooby doo reference... any scooby doo refence actually.
First time in a looooonng time I've read a well made scooby doo reference... any scooby doo refence actually.