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1/21/2017 c1 Guest
this story's great hope you make a naruto vs superman chapter.I LOVE NARUTO!
1/7/2017 c1 4Azaira
Your characters have conversations within each paragraph...
Each character, when "Speaking", should have a paragraph dedicated to them. There are innumerable reasons for this. The biggest being to remove confusion upon who is speaking and allowing the writer complete freedom in description and length towards that character. When writing an entire conversation WITHIN a single paragraph, you're limiting yourself in what can be written. It's absolutely ridiculous.

Anyways, I've started making it a point not to read stories like this, simply because it gets hard to read with the way they are written. It's sad how many good stories tend to get skipped for simple syntax issues.
1/2/2017 c53 pitbull4567
Amazing story
12/31/2016 c53 Chaos-PSD
Pretty good chapter, Wolf. I'm glad to see Mist getting some "screen time". And I liked that scene at the end. Really makes you feel the spirit of the holidays.
12/31/2016 c53 daniel 29
the last bit in this chapter makes perfect sense
12/31/2016 c53 18Hotstreak's crossover stories
I wish you the best of luck and a Happy New Year
12/31/2016 c53 12Memnon45
Great chapter man, keep up the good work and have a happy new year.
12/20/2016 c18 tempestguard
hl epfy5
12/18/2016 c44 Montoyas
Hey man love the story, but it would be nice if you made teen titans chapter in this, showing how naruto gets along with the side kicks would be cool
12/13/2016 c52 warprince2000
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next
12/7/2016 c52 coresplinter
what alot of ppl would give to be Naruto this chapter... xD
12/5/2016 c52 pitbull4567
What a chapter
12/4/2016 c52 Memnon45
Awsome chapter man, can't wait to read what happens next.
12/4/2016 c52 Chaos-PSD
Good chapter, Wolf.
12/4/2016 c52 18Hotstreak's crossover stories
Naruto welcome Shayera back sooner than I expected. Something tells Hawkman and Shadow Theif will team up to kill Naruto
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