for One More Trigger10/15 c15 BlazeStryker
Mwahaha, Mwahaha, Mwahaha-haha! (With apologies to the artists who first penned *Jingle Bells*)
Mwahaha, Mwahaha, Mwahaha-haha! (With apologies to the artists who first penned *Jingle Bells*)
10/7 c18 
2Emissary of Shadow
Are Emma's mother and sister around? I dont recall seeing them mentioned.
2Emissary of ShadowAre Emma's mother and sister around? I dont recall seeing them mentioned.
9/5 c37 jaclon
gah.. cliff hanger... lol loving your style and story.. please don't stop now. ciao til next time
gah.. cliff hanger... lol loving your style and story.. please don't stop now. ciao til next time
9/1 c37 10RevDorothyL
Traitor troopers take down teens, but Purity pauses at pot-shotting pubescents! So suspenseful! :)
Seriously, I love this. Well done.
10RevDorothyLTraitor troopers take down teens, but Purity pauses at pot-shotting pubescents! So suspenseful! :)
Seriously, I love this. Well done.
8/23 c1 Simianpower
Meh. Not really buying Taylor triggering like that with the changed circumstances. She triggered in canon due to being utterly alone and abandoned, but here she still has her bestie. I also don't believe Sophia being Queen Bee. She's too mean, too self-centered. Without Emma she'd have maybe two friends on the track team and nobody else would talk to her.
As setups go, this one has too many SOD-breakers to really fly for me.
Meh. Not really buying Taylor triggering like that with the changed circumstances. She triggered in canon due to being utterly alone and abandoned, but here she still has her bestie. I also don't believe Sophia being Queen Bee. She's too mean, too self-centered. Without Emma she'd have maybe two friends on the track team and nobody else would talk to her.
As setups go, this one has too many SOD-breakers to really fly for me.
8/13 c37 Ted Hsu
We found the PRT rogue troopers, and Purity didn't want a kill order on her. Unfortunately, the bloodthirsty rogues want to keep their advantage, and that could give the Samaritans a chance to take back that edge.
Great to see this fic back up and kicking, I was getting worried for a bit, all the pots boiling except one on the back burner :D
We found the PRT rogue troopers, and Purity didn't want a kill order on her. Unfortunately, the bloodthirsty rogues want to keep their advantage, and that could give the Samaritans a chance to take back that edge.
Great to see this fic back up and kicking, I was getting worried for a bit, all the pots boiling except one on the back burner :D
8/14 c37 Blaze1992
Damn despite their best efforts seems the bay wants some form a fight to happen anyway.
Damn despite their best efforts seems the bay wants some form a fight to happen anyway.
8/14 c36 15H Max Marius
So... Fanfic finally got an email laxative and my inbox was flooded from great height with three pages of story notifications...
Guess what I chose to read first! :D
I'm surprised I missed this on the previous chapter when I first read it last year. So, James' company name... I would have expected a Synonym for 'Final'... something like 'Ultimate Solutions' or the like...
15H Max MariusSo... Fanfic finally got an email laxative and my inbox was flooded from great height with three pages of story notifications...
Guess what I chose to read first! :D
I'm surprised I missed this on the previous chapter when I first read it last year. So, James' company name... I would have expected a Synonym for 'Final'... something like 'Ultimate Solutions' or the like...
8/13 c37 zmanjz
oh shit. did Kayden just decide that now was the perfect time to switch sides?
damn im rooting for that.
oh shit. did Kayden just decide that now was the perfect time to switch sides?
damn im rooting for that.
8/13 c37 24Lexarius
Well done!
After this battle, the Empire will be kaput!
Hopefully the Samaritans will get another member, if things go down as they seem to be.
24LexariusWell done!
After this battle, the Empire will be kaput!
Hopefully the Samaritans will get another member, if things go down as they seem to be.
8/13 c37 18Kung-fu Blaziken
So this'll be the point where Kayden's mom instincts grab all her fears and take them out back to be shot.
18Kung-fu BlazikenSo this'll be the point where Kayden's mom instincts grab all her fears and take them out back to be shot.