for One More Trigger5/23 c30 
7hjcallipygian
This story is so good. I really love where you're taking it and how you're getting there. Can't wait to see what you bring up next. Fantastic!
7hjcallipygianThis story is so good. I really love where you're taking it and how you're getting there. Can't wait to see what you bring up next. Fantastic!
5/18 c12 14H Max Marius
*shakes head sadly*
While I realize the coin-flip thing is canon, it just doesn't work with Coil's described power.
Now, Coil calling the flip accurately 10 or 20 times in a row, that works... but there's no guarantee in a binary system that he would get 10 random occurrences to line up in a row. On at least one occasion, if not more, he'd get tails in both timelines.
14H Max Marius*shakes head sadly*
While I realize the coin-flip thing is canon, it just doesn't work with Coil's described power.
Now, Coil calling the flip accurately 10 or 20 times in a row, that works... but there's no guarantee in a binary system that he would get 10 random occurrences to line up in a row. On at least one occasion, if not more, he'd get tails in both timelines.
4/9 c4 ShadowMurlock
This story is so sweeeeeeet. A universe where Emma didn't break really is a good one...
This story is so sweeeeeeet. A universe where Emma didn't break really is a good one...
1/20 c30 ggf1
if the dragonslayers hadn't interfered Riley would not have had her chance at redemption. hmmm
if the dragonslayers hadn't interfered Riley would not have had her chance at redemption. hmmm
1/10 c16 Svenion
I'm sure this was great, but I tend to skip coil assaults because of the whole time-line swapping. the important bits are always relayed later anywho. I have much respect for writers who go thru the whole thing, and maintain consistency throughout.
I'm sure this was great, but I tend to skip coil assaults because of the whole time-line swapping. the important bits are always relayed later anywho. I have much respect for writers who go thru the whole thing, and maintain consistency throughout.
1/10 c9 Svenion
no way any of those fathers would have okay'd an interview where they give every villain a rundown on their powers. about the dumbest thing they could have done, and goes against how careful the families have been up to this point.
no way any of those fathers would have okay'd an interview where they give every villain a rundown on their powers. about the dumbest thing they could have done, and goes against how careful the families have been up to this point.
1/8 c24 4kingpariah
oh come on!
after a huge victory against the Nine and the effing Slayers idiots set them free just to get the new crafts?! my god these people are morons!
4kingpariahoh come on!
after a huge victory against the Nine and the effing Slayers idiots set them free just to get the new crafts?! my god these people are morons!