for To My Death I Fight11/11/2022 c64 
2Anemone Iris Sidera
It took me a long while to finish this fic but I'm glad I did. It was truly enjoyable from start to finish and I'm a bit sad to have gotten to the end. This was in unexpected crossover and you made it work. Thank you making this fic.
2Anemone Iris SideraIt took me a long while to finish this fic but I'm glad I did. It was truly enjoyable from start to finish and I'm a bit sad to have gotten to the end. This was in unexpected crossover and you made it work. Thank you making this fic.
5/12/2022 c27 Guest
"For just a moment Jackie Tristan looked like she might actually speak but instead she spat at Tsumugu's face, "Aller en enfers. You won't get a word out of me, you Nudist pigs! I'd rather die by Lady Ragyo's glorious hands than turn traitor!""
The correct French sentence here would be "Allez en enfer!".
"C'est quoi ce bordel, c'est que pour?"
You could shorten it to "C'est quoi ce bordel?", the second part of the sentence comes off as nonsensical in French.
"For just a moment Jackie Tristan looked like she might actually speak but instead she spat at Tsumugu's face, "Aller en enfers. You won't get a word out of me, you Nudist pigs! I'd rather die by Lady Ragyo's glorious hands than turn traitor!""
The correct French sentence here would be "Allez en enfer!".
"C'est quoi ce bordel, c'est que pour?"
You could shorten it to "C'est quoi ce bordel?", the second part of the sentence comes off as nonsensical in French.
4/18/2022 c64 reader Rana
as a person who reads crossover fanfiction, this is by far one of the best if not greatest fanfiction I've ever read
as a person who reads crossover fanfiction, this is by far one of the best if not greatest fanfiction I've ever read
11/21/2021 c13 Eddyg125
How come Yoruichi didn't inform ichigo of Bui once she found out? By the way I still enjoy the story this is just me pointing something's out
How come Yoruichi didn't inform ichigo of Bui once she found out? By the way I still enjoy the story this is just me pointing something's out
11/20/2021 c2 Eddyg125
reading this a second time I find it really unlikely that Nui could pose a threat to Kisuke. This second ready is opening my eyes to how nerfed bleach characters became
reading this a second time I find it really unlikely that Nui could pose a threat to Kisuke. This second ready is opening my eyes to how nerfed bleach characters became
10/17/2021 c10 Boremfreadingfanfics
Aint no fucking way nui is stronger than yoruichi and kisuke. And this is why i hate fanfics you fucking nerf them
Aint no fucking way nui is stronger than yoruichi and kisuke. And this is why i hate fanfics you fucking nerf them
7/15/2021 c11 Elver Galarga
It was an amazing battle, but the best part was ichigo getting vaccinated… I can’t stop laughing my ass XD
It was an amazing battle, but the best part was ichigo getting vaccinated… I can’t stop laughing my ass XD