for Naruto Uzumaki: The Last Kaiju Summoner12/23/2017 c1 garystubatman
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5/9/2017 c1 The Question
What about the pairing?
What about the pairing?
5/8/2017 c14 Zach
Remake tiiiiiimmmmmmeeeeeeee
Remake tiiiiiimmmmmmeeeeeeee
5/8/2017 c14 Austin
Well honestly I'm glad that you are finally out of your darn funk.
Also will naruto in this Kaiju story be a bit different in your redo since naruto will be a bit more brutal because of Kaiju influence.
Good luck on all you redos.
Ps can you try of rwby Kaiju xover of jaune getting the ability to change his armor into a certain Kaiju themed armor like Ezra requip magic.
If you don't like this idea I understand I was only suggesting.
Well honestly I'm glad that you are finally out of your darn funk.
Also will naruto in this Kaiju story be a bit different in your redo since naruto will be a bit more brutal because of Kaiju influence.
Good luck on all you redos.
Ps can you try of rwby Kaiju xover of jaune getting the ability to change his armor into a certain Kaiju themed armor like Ezra requip magic.
If you don't like this idea I understand I was only suggesting.
1/19/2017 c10 Critic0001
I'm sorry but after trying to give your story a try it became apparent that all your doing is trying to establish a harem with no real plot around it. You give mentioning to a plot here and there, but in all honesty this just ending up as a generic harem. After reading the first two chapters I thought that this story had potential, or at the very least would be interesting.
Im not hating it, but the story has problems and I just want you to be aware of them, from one writer to another. What plot there is seems hallow and lacking, the characters seem to generic (though that is right now and obviously this part could change in the future), lastly Naruto's kekki genkai, needed to be explored more instead of glossed over. It would have been interesting to have him train to utilize his powers and progressively become stronger, but alas you went for the generic route.
Out of the stories that have been made on this crossover section over the years yours is middle at best compared to quite a few that were taken though...although since two more are gone I guess this section really isn't worth checking out anymore since no one seems to be ballsy enough to make a story that doesn't seem repeative.
If that guy who wrote "Vessel of The Golden Dragon" was still here I would say that this section still had a chance but since he's gone this section will just become stale now like many others before it.
P.S. It seems a little weird to me that only yours and one other's stories weren't directly harassed by trolls and haters, you should address this issue that it isn't right to harass writers over their works, if you got a writer's heart.
P.S.S. If this isn't in the review section by next week then you apparently one of those guys that can't take Constructive criticism.
I'm sorry but after trying to give your story a try it became apparent that all your doing is trying to establish a harem with no real plot around it. You give mentioning to a plot here and there, but in all honesty this just ending up as a generic harem. After reading the first two chapters I thought that this story had potential, or at the very least would be interesting.
Im not hating it, but the story has problems and I just want you to be aware of them, from one writer to another. What plot there is seems hallow and lacking, the characters seem to generic (though that is right now and obviously this part could change in the future), lastly Naruto's kekki genkai, needed to be explored more instead of glossed over. It would have been interesting to have him train to utilize his powers and progressively become stronger, but alas you went for the generic route.
Out of the stories that have been made on this crossover section over the years yours is middle at best compared to quite a few that were taken though...although since two more are gone I guess this section really isn't worth checking out anymore since no one seems to be ballsy enough to make a story that doesn't seem repeative.
If that guy who wrote "Vessel of The Golden Dragon" was still here I would say that this section still had a chance but since he's gone this section will just become stale now like many others before it.
P.S. It seems a little weird to me that only yours and one other's stories weren't directly harassed by trolls and haters, you should address this issue that it isn't right to harass writers over their works, if you got a writer's heart.
P.S.S. If this isn't in the review section by next week then you apparently one of those guys that can't take Constructive criticism.
12/19/2016 c13 Paul O'Hara
It's ok we all make mistakes so just give it your all my friend no matter what!
It's ok we all make mistakes so just give it your all my friend no matter what!
12/10/2016 c13 Kushina's Biggest fan
all your stories, man that sucks! well focus on getting better first. Fanfiction is all good but your own health is more so. so take your time get better we or at least I will be weighting for your return with a mouse and a smile
all your stories, man that sucks! well focus on getting better first. Fanfiction is all good but your own health is more so. so take your time get better we or at least I will be weighting for your return with a mouse and a smile
12/5/2016 c13 
31Ring2ruleThemAll
Hey, it's no problem man, everybody on this site has neglected their work at least once either because of life or the need of a break. Even people in this crossover category have done that, Ares from FallenOlympian96 had college and lost his latest chapter, a couple others that are still around have gone long periods between postings, and I myself have had life rear its ugly head a couple times since my last update, so it's all good, just take your time.
Keep up the good work :)
31Ring2ruleThemAllHey, it's no problem man, everybody on this site has neglected their work at least once either because of life or the need of a break. Even people in this crossover category have done that, Ares from FallenOlympian96 had college and lost his latest chapter, a couple others that are still around have gone long periods between postings, and I myself have had life rear its ugly head a couple times since my last update, so it's all good, just take your time.
Keep up the good work :)
12/4/2016 c13 18Kaizer Daozang
I know how you feel man. You do something and feel accomplished about it only to find out later you messed up somewhere and have to redo the whole thing again.
18Kaizer DaozangI know how you feel man. You do something and feel accomplished about it only to find out later you messed up somewhere and have to redo the whole thing again.
12/3/2016 c13 BANKAIZEN
hey when your enjoying a video game it's understandable to forget about things
hey when your enjoying a video game it's understandable to forget about things