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34Zarla
Wow, trippy. Sounds like Mother Brain talkin in da first bit. Very cool though. My only small nitpick would be some minor spelling errors, but that's easily fixable.
34ZarlaWow, trippy. Sounds like Mother Brain talkin in da first bit. Very cool though. My only small nitpick would be some minor spelling errors, but that's easily fixable.
10/17/2002 c1 Andrew Lou
Quite good. I like the way you make her really sound as if she were talking in her last moments. Keep up the good work.
Quite good. I like the way you make her really sound as if she were talking in her last moments. Keep up the good work.
10/17/2002 c1 10Sharonlover
Oh man this is beeeeautiful! I like the way you made this, very well written. I enjoyed the incorporation of Fusion too! Great way to keep the section alive with new stuff. Highly enjoyed and recommended!
10SharonloverOh man this is beeeeautiful! I like the way you made this, very well written. I enjoyed the incorporation of Fusion too! Great way to keep the section alive with new stuff. Highly enjoyed and recommended!