
4/13/2014 c1 Cheyenne
Well, I have to say that it was amazing! I think there was a grammar thing a few times, but I only noticed it because I am a grammar freak, so, yeah. I don't understand why I'm the first reviewer, because this is the type of story that should have at least 50 in a week. Well, I'm proud to be the first!
Keep on writing!
Cheyenne (No, that is not my real name)
Well, I have to say that it was amazing! I think there was a grammar thing a few times, but I only noticed it because I am a grammar freak, so, yeah. I don't understand why I'm the first reviewer, because this is the type of story that should have at least 50 in a week. Well, I'm proud to be the first!
Keep on writing!
Cheyenne (No, that is not my real name)