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2/3/2017 c1 5fangirl202122
Literally cried...WHHHHYYYY?
9/19/2015 c1 8Marius blowthebarricade
Holy...

My gosh, this was phenomenal! Fantastic! Perfect! I cannot tell you how much I loved this story! This was perfectly brilliant, and tragic, and beautiful. This story was so full of sorrow but at the same time there was hope. It was a perfect bittersweet ending. This was flawless writing. You are a fantastic writer! Well done! Perfectly done! Bravo!

First of all, I don't know if I have told you before (but maybe you noticed from "Between Love and Loss"): I absolutely love stories when there is marriage and children, especially between Enjolras and Éponine. It is absolutely adorable. These types of stories always touch my heart, and this one was awesome! This was without doubt my favorite marriage/child fanfiction that I have ever read! And that is saying a lot!

As soon as the accident happened and Enjolras woke up by himself in the hospital, I knew. I hoped dreadfully that I was wrong, but I knew something was terribly wrong. I just had this feeling, and I feared so much that Éponine had been killed, but I thought her child had died as well. Then, when Combeferre was talking to Enjolras and seemed to be avoiding the topic, I really started dreading it. Then, when Enjolras remembered them and he began to panic, and Combeferre and the doctor still would not tell Enjolras what had happened to his wife and child, I knew for sure. But I never guessed that the child survived.

I guess even when I knew that it was too late and that Éponine had been killed, I was still holding onto a bit of hope (I was totally in denial) that she had somehow made it. But when they brought Enjolras to the morgue… My goodness, this is just too sad. I personally thought it was a cruel way for his friends to deliver the blow to him; I think it might have been easier for Enjolras if they just told him. But as for the sake of the story, it was perfect and beautiful the way you did this. Also, since Enjolras was in shock and already in denial, I guess he might not have believed them if they just told him. This was probably a better way to make him understand. He had to “see for himself.” He had to see it to believe it.

Of course, I thought Éponine and her child had died. For a minute, I was just as confused as Enjolras when they brought him to the NICU, but then Combeferre said
“You do not want to meet your son?” That was perfect. We thought everything was over and terrible and tragic, and then you return a bit of hope, a bit of happiness. This was perfectly, beautifully done.

Éponine was quite a hero. She was so brave and strong. She knew that she would not make it, but, sacrificing any hope of her own survival, she saved her child. That is true love. There is no greater love than giving up one’s life for another. Éponine truly would have been a wonderful mother. But now she is gone, so Enjolras must raise the child. And he will be a great father.

Like I have said, this was a bittersweet ending, but it was perfect. I love this story so much. Every detail was perfect. I loved the story, the plot, the characterization, the way you described and portrayed everything, the writing, itself. This was fantastic! You did a marvelous job with this story. Thank you so much. Reading this really made my day!
1/16/2015 c1 beautifulqueenx
Wtf this hurts so much B Y E
1/11/2015 c1 Smithy
Aw, how sad. I read a 'Pirates of the Caribbean' one where Will was violently widowed after someone murdered Elizabeth and she was pregnant and the doctor had to perform a C-section. Poor Will was accused of murder. Will acted just like how Enj is acting.
1/6/2015 c1 1IQ4730
This is interesting because it is a bit different and I love it! I think it's interesting how Enjolras thinks about Eponine. It's not subtle but it's not completely out-of-the-ordinary obvious either. I like that little balance you've got there. All in all, I really loved this story, too.
12/17/2014 c1 16Freedom909
This was too much.
Oh god. I think I just died three deaths.
How can you do this to me! I was just so intrigued to come read this...and oh god.
I'm sobbing. My heart hurts.

Truly a beautifully tragic piece! Well done!
2/4/2014 c1 10insignificantramblings
absolutely beautiful; I loved it! so glad that I read this :)
I thought it was going to be a sad sad sad sad story but then at the end it was hopeful and beautiful and tragically great.
the best part in my opinion (but only because I'm a sap when it comes to friends) is the fact that enj's apartment had been taken care of/dusted/etc before he went back. that's a really lovely bit
2/4/2014 c1 Team Les Amis
(too lazy to log in) AWWWWW :( THIS WAS SO SAD:( POOR EPONINE! Amazing job! You should write more E/E stories :)))))
2/4/2014 c1 62astoryinred
Oh gosh. I'm crying too hard to even review coherently. This is terribly sad, but still very much them in a modern AU. Good writing!

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