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2/5/2014 c1 5BadGrasshopper
You use third person very well, most of the stories on here are told in first. I usually feel a little disconnected with the characters, but you did really good with drawing people in. I can already tell Jace is awesome :)
2/5/2014 c1 Ami.Love1
good start! keep writting , i want to see Castiel and Jace together ! xoxo

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