for Glace's space place case6/1/2021 c1 
28SailorChronos1
Your concept is interesting, but your writing style is a bit difficult for me to follow because it reads like a TV script rather than prose. Keep up the good work.
28SailorChronos1Your concept is interesting, but your writing style is a bit difficult for me to follow because it reads like a TV script rather than prose. Keep up the good work.
4/18/2015 c6 77QUEENSPELLER67
1. Eating with chopsticks is fun.
2. Is Mameme addicted to cigarettes?
That was a good story.
77QUEENSPELLER671. Eating with chopsticks is fun.
2. Is Mameme addicted to cigarettes?
That was a good story.
4/12/2015 c5 QUEENSPELLER67
1. Toy dart guns are fun.
2. Davis must've felt embarrassed seeing Glace somewhat naked.
3. Are Contay, Covan, and Davis the same person?
1. Toy dart guns are fun.
2. Davis must've felt embarrassed seeing Glace somewhat naked.
3. Are Contay, Covan, and Davis the same person?
4/7/2015 c4 QUEENSPELLER67
1. How did you come up with the name for the satellite?
2. That was a really convincing clone.
3. The title fit the chapter's plot.
4. Marao seems kinda messed up in the head.
Good chapter.
1. How did you come up with the name for the satellite?
2. That was a really convincing clone.
3. The title fit the chapter's plot.
4. Marao seems kinda messed up in the head.
Good chapter.
3/25/2015 c3 QUEENSPELLER67
1. Nice alliteration with the title.
2. How old is Nina?
3. Mameme seems to like taking pictures. Especially with Davis.
4. If Nina is under 21, does that mean you made her an underage drinker without people trying to know?
5. I thought Nina was drinking alcohol, not soda. You stated that she put the bottle of soda down.
1. Nice alliteration with the title.
2. How old is Nina?
3. Mameme seems to like taking pictures. Especially with Davis.
4. If Nina is under 21, does that mean you made her an underage drinker without people trying to know?
5. I thought Nina was drinking alcohol, not soda. You stated that she put the bottle of soda down.
1/22/2015 c2 QUEENSPELLER67
1. Is "Laser Lighter" an actual game or did you make it up?
2. Did Mameme start smoking cigarettes randomly?
3. Is Mameme practicing a certain religion?
1. Is "Laser Lighter" an actual game or did you make it up?
2. Did Mameme start smoking cigarettes randomly?
3. Is Mameme practicing a certain religion?
1/6/2015 c1 QUEENSPELLER67
1. Did you know that Jun is a counterpart for Barry in Pokemon?
2. Is Ken a friend of Davis?
3. What does TK stand for?
I liked the title for this chapter.
1. Did you know that Jun is a counterpart for Barry in Pokemon?
2. Is Ken a friend of Davis?
3. What does TK stand for?
I liked the title for this chapter.
3/2/2014 c1 9outlaw2448
Why not just make this a crossover of Fooly Cooly and Digimon?
Aside from a few name changes, and some changes here and there it's FLCL.
9outlaw2448Why not just make this a crossover of Fooly Cooly and Digimon?
Aside from a few name changes, and some changes here and there it's FLCL.