
2/7/2014 c1 Guest
Haha, I wonder how Sherlock is going to deal with having a teenage girl stay in the flat with him! Love the sarcasm between him and Mycroft, it's exactly how I imagine them. Great writing, can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Haha, I wonder how Sherlock is going to deal with having a teenage girl stay in the flat with him! Love the sarcasm between him and Mycroft, it's exactly how I imagine them. Great writing, can't wait for the next chapter! :)
2/6/2014 c1
7Zeef
Just a suggestion, but maybe you should elaborate on her age. Sherlock mentions that she's a teenager, and I'm willing to go with the fact that he could deduce that, but John would be curious as to how he knew the niece's age. Maybe you could have Mycroft say how many years old she is, and how, even though Harry's gay, she has a child. Just a few suggestions to help! I think this is a great idea and I can't wait to meet her!

Just a suggestion, but maybe you should elaborate on her age. Sherlock mentions that she's a teenager, and I'm willing to go with the fact that he could deduce that, but John would be curious as to how he knew the niece's age. Maybe you could have Mycroft say how many years old she is, and how, even though Harry's gay, she has a child. Just a few suggestions to help! I think this is a great idea and I can't wait to meet her!
2/6/2014 c1
1sarrogin
nice! curious to see where it goes! You captured the relationship between Mycroft and Sherlock quite well.
:)

nice! curious to see where it goes! You captured the relationship between Mycroft and Sherlock quite well.
:)
2/6/2014 c1 DeeDee
Update quickly? Please!
Update quickly? Please!
2/6/2014 c1 ysghjhksuup9ds
oooh! i really like this, and i cant wait to meet this mysterious neice :)
oooh! i really like this, and i cant wait to meet this mysterious neice :)