for Real Eyes, Realize, Real Lies11/23/2015 c2 
16bubblegum shaved ice
You should align your text to the left, I think you would get more readers since your content is actually good ]
16bubblegum shaved iceYou should align your text to the left, I think you would get more readers since your content is actually good ]
4/12/2014 c2 Guest
Man so good caant wait for the next chapter hopefully you upload it soon
Man so good caant wait for the next chapter hopefully you upload it soon
4/10/2014 c2 3Art is an Eternal Bang
This is rly good so far! How often are you thinking of updating? I hope u try to every day!
3Art is an Eternal BangThis is rly good so far! How often are you thinking of updating? I hope u try to every day!
4/9/2014 c2 Tj
Hey !
This is getting interesting. I cant wait to See what will Happen next. Please Update soon.
Will follow your Story.
Hurry up !
Hey !
This is getting interesting. I cant wait to See what will Happen next. Please Update soon.
Will follow your Story.
Hurry up !
4/8/2014 c2 itachi13080
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE MORE!
I really like how your writing it and the feel of the story. :) Suspense...so much suspense! This only makes us want to read it more. ;)
Quick question; Are you going to continue writing the chapters with the words centering in the middle?
Just asking, cause using it to start the story gives it a really 'cool' feel to it. But that's only for the first chapters. :P
Other then that the story is GREAT! ;D
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE MORE!
I really like how your writing it and the feel of the story. :) Suspense...so much suspense! This only makes us want to read it more. ;)
Quick question; Are you going to continue writing the chapters with the words centering in the middle?
Just asking, cause using it to start the story gives it a really 'cool' feel to it. But that's only for the first chapters. :P
Other then that the story is GREAT! ;D
4/7/2014 c2 Guest
Great chapter. Can't wait for some sasusaku interaction ;)
Great chapter. Can't wait for some sasusaku interaction ;)
4/7/2014 c2 Guest
Dun dun dun! Lol can't wait for the next one. One question why did you add the other letters after naruto's name?
Dun dun dun! Lol can't wait for the next one. One question why did you add the other letters after naruto's name?
4/6/2014 c2 S.Kirschbluete
Hey !
OMG That was so amazing, Can't wait for the next chapter. I like the idea, that Sakura sort of lost her memories !
Please update sooooon ! k ?
Already a huge fan
Hey !
OMG That was so amazing, Can't wait for the next chapter. I like the idea, that Sakura sort of lost her memories !
Please update sooooon ! k ?
Already a huge fan
2/26/2014 c1 Guest
Really good. Nicely written.
Really good. Nicely written.
2/19/2014 c1 Guest
I like it! Continue please
I like it! Continue please
2/17/2014 c1 Guest
2nd chapter please!
2nd chapter please!