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5/17/2015 c1 6aka CZ
Very nice impact for a TR one-shot. I like the inclusion/use of one of the artifacts into the story!
12/16/2014 c1 Guest
I luv it
4/18/2014 c1 59RapunzelInTheSnow
Awesome story
2/8/2014 c1 36listeninggame
It's wonderful, Nentone! It's great. Congratulations!
2/8/2014 c1 25Midnight Lost
Very good writing style.

A little lost as I have never played Temple Run, or have even heard of it to be exact unfortunately.

However, I would say continue. You have skill in writing.
2/7/2014 c1 5Hills-to-Sky
Pretty good.
With the small story you've written, you've certainly struck up a mystery that people want to solve.
You also have introduced characters well
2/7/2014 c1 6HeatherMoonPixie
It's very good. Not a 'word' is said, yet it is easy to understand. I really like it.

-Heather xx

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